Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Bi-Directional Poetry

Bi-directional Poetry
Your assignment is to create a poem that can be read both forwards and backwards.  It is a challenging assignment that can bring a multitude of benefits to your writing; it can open up the possibility to perceive new possibilities in word structure, as well as add depth and dimension to a single poetic concept.

This assignment also teaches the importance of comma placement. Since your poem has to be read both forwards and backwards, reorganization reagarding comma placement becomes crucial in making your poem readable in both directions.  For today's part of the assignment, do not include any commas.  We will return to the comma placement portion at a later time.

Because this assignment is so difficult, I only ask that your poem be a minimum of seven lines, with a minimum of three words per line.  It is due at the end of the period.

Here's an example I constructed to help guide you:

Peaceful and quiet
eternal sleep makes it so
death is transformation
soon comes change
pain wilting slowly
like dying flowers
ending is beginning

48 comments:

  1. She asked he
    will he sacrifice
    or will he leave
    he is everything to she
    evil stands there
    he will protect she
    love will be tested

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    1. Aside from the "he/she" issue, this is very good.

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  2. Death is haunting
    Memories are tragic
    Death and happiness
    Love is lost
    Memories floats place to place
    Everywhere are dreams
    Dreams runs over hope

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    1. You are really growing as a writer. I feel so lucky to be a part of it.

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  4. Opening graciousness of doors,
    Shrubbery of careful planning,
    Beautifully-crafted gnomes growing in awareness,
    Unstoppable seasons in motion,
    Jaw-dropping flowers of wonder,
    Chimes dinging in background
    With evenings sunshine-filled.

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  5. The silhouette stepped from the shadows, taking the shape of one of the most renowned commanders of the Legion, BlackStone. He would slit his own men’s throats if they hesitated at any command he gave. His armor was a shimmering white, an insult to the color and the purity it came with. He rested his left hand on the hilt of his sword, resting against his left hip. That sword, the knight knew, had seen more bloodshed than any piece of metal ever crafted. Vice was its name. It had been passed down from father to son over God knows how many generations. The sword was what gave the BlackStone family such renown. The question that was always asked was whether it was the BlackStone’s that gave the sword its wicked name, or whether the sword itself had disparaged the BlackStone family name

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  7. anchor dropped low
    pulling down close
    wrong is right
    now steps untraceable
    now deep in
    addiction in mode
    it’s fiending wrong

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    1. I'm still not sure about "fiending," but other than that, this is very good.

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  8. Traits human embraced are
    Good and bad
    Tribulations and Triumphs
    White and Black
    Wrong and Right
    Left and Right
    Cowardice and Bravery

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  9. Poems are often frustrating
    Reckless and crazed
    Picking word by word
    Pencils are near
    Unused and wasted
    Being driven insane
    Frustrating are poems

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  10. Happy!

    She is sad
    Very sad
    Am I sad
    She is sad
    Very sad
    Am I sad
    Is she.

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  12. ...American am I
    true made statements
    often high flying
    eyeing those delegating
    always forgotten the befriended
    loyaly serving the boycott
    American am I ?..

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    1. This is really cool in a subversive sort of way. It challenges one's thought. Great job.

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    2. thanks koop. i'll try harder next time.

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  13. Honest is love
    Freedom seldom truth
    Is Truth Pretty
    Aren't lies pretty
    Burden means heavy
    Heaviness is another's
    Yours is mine

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    1. Wow, you are such a natural writer. I love this.

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  14. Ryan P. Tunison

    Ringing bells are
    ceaseless and ominous
    ding of incessancy
    carried howling far-off
    following distance of
    invading those for
    victory and plunders

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    1. This makes me laugh because it mirrors the experience of being interrupted by the dismissal bell in this class. Awesome job.

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  15. Life becomes death

    Death is imminent

    Love is everything

    Ying and yang

    Joy and pain

    Seeing is believing

    Old becomes new

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    1. I like the way you played with the opposites in the piece. Excellent.

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  16. Happiness is pain
    Vividly and surreptitiously
    Time cries, but
    Found hope in
    Comfort and security
    Like white needs black
    And sunshine needs rain.

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    1. Very good. Not only did you execute the format well, but there is a depth to this poem that is well suited to its form. Great job.

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  17. Karma will always be there
    If good is done
    Good shall be returned,
    If bad is done
    Bad will come back,
    To keep equilibrium
    On this earth

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  18. Pain is love
    As often one
    As tides push to
    People call help
    They hurt due to
    Pain disguised as
    Hope and love

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  20. Mirrors reflecting life
    Immediately making so,
    Life reflecting mirrors:
    Choices, decisions making
    Impressions of eternity
    An e/affect which, we,
    Understanding, fate and destiny.

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  21. World of reason
    Clock that strikes eight
    Daytime has risen
    New time and date
    Time rules society
    But society rules time
    Power of reason
    Over power of mind

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    1. You've created an elegant rhythm, both forward and backward. I'm a fan of the rhyme as well.

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  22. Who am I?

    Where do I belong?

    Confused and unsure
    I wish I knew

    Trying to discover the “real me”

    Where does my path lead?

    What kind of person am I?

    Who am I?

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  23. Where are you
    Skies lite by dreams
    Light found darkness
    In lost thoughts
    Scary and misshapen
    Now think deeply
    You are where

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    1. I like that the two poems are reflections of one another in tone.

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  24. Love and pain
    Smile and tears
    Happy and Heartbreaking times
    Strong and weak points
    Together and apart
    Loving and forgetful moments
    Long lasting memories

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    1. A good strategy to use conjunctions to complete this challenging assignment.

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  25. Gone forgotten and
    Lost with love
    She goes under
    Over taking by
    Fate and time
    Her intriguing heart
    Broken with everlasting love

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    1. I like that you can read the whole thing backward and it still makes sense, not just the lines.

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  26. Jerry and Whale
    Blue is whale the
    Give that cat a pat
    Pat pat pat
    Cat cat cat
    Fail fail fail
    Says mrs ell

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