Diamante
Diamante is a seven-line, diamond-shaped poem which contrasts two opposites. It is more a visual poem than one to be read aloud. Students can illustrate their final copies to produce an art piece. It follows this format:
First
Line and seventh line - Name the opposites.
Second and sixth lines - Two adjectives describing the opposite nearest it.
Third and fifth lines - Three participles (ing words) describing the nearest opposite.
Fourth line - two nouns (if possible) for each of the opposites. (This is the transition point where the poem changes from one of the opposites to the other.)
Second and sixth lines - Two adjectives describing the opposite nearest it.
Third and fifth lines - Three participles (ing words) describing the nearest opposite.
Fourth line - two nouns (if possible) for each of the opposites. (This is the transition point where the poem changes from one of the opposites to the other.)
Peaks,
Snowcapped, windswept,
Reaching, waiting, challenging
mountain ranges, ocean trenches,
Obscuring, waiting, daunting
Dark, black
Depths
Snowcapped, windswept,
Reaching, waiting, challenging
mountain ranges, ocean trenches,
Obscuring, waiting, daunting
Dark, black
Depths
Your assignment is to construct three of these. They are due at the end of the period.
Something wasn’t right about the pair, though. They looked…aged. Gavin’s face was no longer that of a newborns. He had an even stubble around his jawline, his skin was a bit tanner, and he had some scars on his face. His hair was styled into a flip of spikes that snuck out from underneath the front of his new beret. He had a brand new sniper rifle that looked top of the line resting on his back. He also wore full Syndicate plated armor as opposed to the crappy cloth gear they gave all Privates. Not to mention he was at least a foot taller.
ReplyDeleteIsaac hadn’t changed much. His dreadlocks were a bit longer, maybe. He had a couple more scars and more stress lines on his face. He had the same dark complexion, same lost eye, same insanely tall height, all that was different was that he’d downgraded from the monk looking robe to the same armor as Gavin but with a platinum trim.
Love,
ReplyDeleteGlow, purity
Desiring, wanting, caring
Honey moons, lonely nights
Hurting, threatening, darkening
Anger, Furious
Hate
Bright
Light, shine
Blinding, Warming, Sparkling
Eye opening, time alone
Hating, scaring, threatening
Loneliness, cold
Dark
Winter
Cold, bitter
Snowing, shivering, whitening
Ginger bread, vacation house
Sweating, burning, tanning
Pool, hot
Summer
Sun
ReplyDeleteBright, light
Shining, sparkling, amazing
Beautiful day, cold night
Calming, darkening, changing
Spooky, lonely
Moon
Joy
Happy, magical
Singing, dancing, laughing
Immense happiness, bitter sadness
Longing, hoping, waiting
Hopeless, dreadful
Sorrow
Hot
Warm, summer
Blistering, beating, heating
Summer day, winter night
Freezing, chilling, snowing
Icy, frozen
Cold
Rainforest
ReplyDeleteWet, Green
Growing, Raining, Steaming
Thick Greenery, Open Spaces
Sweating, dying, longing
Heat, Sand
Desert
The dark was all she saw
ReplyDeleteIt occasionally came with peaks of light
The light just filled her life with false hopes
She tried so hard to get out
It was never enough
It seemed as if she would just get pushed down deeper at times
There was never an in between phase for her
The dark was pitch black and the peaks of light were as bright as ever
Those peaks rarely came
Her life was basically filled with dark
It was as if she was trapped
But now that is all gone
She finally found her way out
It took time
But she realized a lot
She realized that she couldn’t have her happiness depend on others
However she doesn’t regret a thing
She learned a lot from the pain that she was put in
Her temporary dark helped her find her light that will last her forever
She is now free
Free from the world that she used to know
It is all about the world that she has now entered
other assignment .
ReplyDeleteWhen a child is young and is in the process of growing up they have a large group of friends, partially because making and keeping friends weren’t that difficult. Friendships back in elementary school were based on who was nice to you and who you had things in common with, in today’s world friendships are totally different. I’ve realized that when I was in the fifth grade, I could probably name about twenty people I considered to be a friend of mine. Now that I’m in high school and have two years down already, I can only name about five or six people that I’m close to. As you get older, you start to notice people’s true colors and realize that they weren’t really your friend from the beginning. The way I see it, I’m getting older and more mature, I don’t have time to worry about who is loyal and who is trustworthy. I guess the saying, “High school changes people, sometimes for better and sometimes for worse,” is actually true. It hurts not being able to tell that person things anymore or get advice from them, but life moves on and people learn from their mistakes. I don’t think I have it all figured it out, but I do think I’m getting somewhere. I often wonder how many friends I’m going to have by the time I graduate, and it seems as though every year my circle gets smaller. I’m actually okay with that because that’s less people I have to worry about betraying me. It’s a good thing finding out who your real friends are at a young age. You always know who your real friends are when you get into something serious. This shows you who is actually there and who will leave you to handle the situation on your own.
War
ReplyDeleteDestructive, violent
Raging, deafening, trying
Times of misery, times of redemption
Satisfying, beaming, gratifying
Beautiful, incomprehensible
Creation
Love
Passionate, everlasting
Strengthening, creating, redefining
Unconditional devotion, apathy
Boring, detaching, uncaring
Reductive, callous,
Indifference
Happiness
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, touching
Laughing, living, loving
Many emotions, confused feelings
Breaking, crying, tearing
Ugly, unwanted
Sadness
Volleyball
Strong, arm-skilled
Setting, bumping, spiking
Many athletes, many sports
Kicking, shooting, scoring
Speedy, feet-skilled
Soccer
June
Warm, sunny
Playing, swimming, tanning
The seasons of summer and winter
Shivering, hiding, napping
Cold, snowy
December
Dreams
ReplyDeletePeaceful, Hopeful
Sleeping, Resting, Aspiring
Warm Bed, Vigorous Tremors
Chilling, Falling, Looming
Shadows, Doom
Nightmare
Winter
ReplyDeleteArctic, Bitter
Freezing, Frosting, Boring
Snowflakes, Ice Skates, Cookouts, Hot nights
Scorching, Relaxing, Sizzling
Pleasant, Balmy
Summer
Day
ReplyDeleteBright, Hopeful
Welcoming, Waiting, Sun-shining
Sky, Earth
Enveloping, Chilling, Embracing
Shadowy, Mysterious
Night
Him
Hopeful, Happy
Willing, Working, Singing
Home, Hospital
Hoping, Crying, Hiding
Sad, Afraid
Her
Dogs
Loyal, Man’s best friend
Caring, Loving, Running
Backyard, Bed
Pouncing, Clawing, Purring
Skeptical, Hungry
Cats
Summer
ReplyDeleteHot, Sunny
Swimming, Tanning, Sweating
Beaches, Stay in
Sledding, Snowing, Freezing
Cold, Cloudy
Winter
Happy
Smile, Laugh
Joking, Cheering, Loving
On Cloud Nine, Sick at Heart
Crying, Hurting, Languishing
Frown, Gloomy
Sad
Fast
Speed, Quick
Hurrying, Running, Scampering
Cheetahs, Turtles
Tip-Toeing, Crawling, Floating
Tired, Worn Out
Slow
Darkness
ReplyDeleteQuiet, Lonely
Soothing, Deafening, Chilling
Moon, Sun
Vibrating, Awakening, Boring
Loud, Bright
Light
Fantasy
Creativity, Warmness
Writing, Painting, Creating
Escape, Prison
Working, Fighting
Atrocious, Cold
Reality
Beach
Smooth, Sandy
Soothing, Crashing, Enlightening
Ocean, Subway
Hustling, Bustling, Moving
Rough, Busy
City
***These are all random tidbits and have no relation to one another! *** (Just saying.)
ReplyDeleteTreat thyself similar to a cactus—when all else fails, point.
Dapper is another way of describing my favorite electronic—the clapper. That’s right. The clapper is indeed dapper.
So I know that everyone has that one person in their life that they both feared and hated and thoroughly enjoyed doing so. My person was this older woman. Let’s call her… Mrs. Frey Hoffer. Now, this woman was nice. I’m not saying that she was a monster or a ruthless cartel leader. Nothing like that. But she was a pain in the ass to deal with and it definitely made my life interesting. You see, I was volunteering at this school on the weekends. I won’t say what type of school I went to every Sunday morning. But I was a classroom aide, which means I showed up late every week and did absolutely nothing while I was there—pretty classic stuff. So this one week, I had missed my ninety-four alarms and had woken up late. Yet I was still determined to go because I wanted to prove to the staff there that I wasn’t a flaky, lazy teenager with terrible punctuality—which I was, but not really important to mention. So I make it there halfway through the hour-long class and I approach the door. Now everyone who is late knows that the doors are always locked because of the danger of school shootings, so I reluctantly ring the doorbell, knowing full well that Mrs. Frey Hoffer will answer the door and scold me for my tardiness. Rrring! Rrring! No answer. I hit the other doorbell. Barring! Barring! Nothing. Okay, I think to myself. I have to tap on the window: that’s the last-case-scenario when you walk across the lawn and tap on the window of the classroom. Then someone from the class will let you in. Now, I count the windows—you know, like a pro—and I count one, two. I then trudge through the snow over to the second window—the giant, paneless window—and I don’t even get to tap on it. There, right before me, looking at me incredulously, is Mrs. Frey Hoffer herself; and my breath catches in my chest and stomach drops twenty-nine stories. I wouldn’t be as afraid if it were Bain before me. So she’s looking at me and I’m in shock and, of course, absolutely embarrassed. Like a total moron, I just mouth “doorbell,” making the doorbell motion with my index finger. I looked like a freaking mime—a bad one because I don’t think that mimes are supposed to mouth what they’re acting out. She then opens the side door for me, informs me that she was in a parent meeting. Oh great, I think. But worst of all, she says that the doors—remember the building has those?—they were ALL OPEN. A piece of me died in that moment.
P.S. Koop, I had posted it during class and then realized that I left something...inappropriate up there. So I deleted it and reposted my work without it. Here ye, here ye.
DeleteCORRECTION: "MY CHEST AND STOMACH DROP."
DeleteGirls
ReplyDeleteEmotional, Sassy
Loving, Caring, Charming
Dresses, Nails, Footballs, Basketballs
Disgusting, Baffling, Amusing
Jerks, Mischievous
Boys
Love
Peaceful, Emotional
Cherishing, Enchanting, Devoting
Heart, Marriage, Death, Envy
Loathing, Discouraging, Disgusting
Bitter, Infernal
Hate
Life
ReplyDeleteFiery, Vibrant
Learning, growing, enjoying
Existence, soul, heart
Witherithing, fading, passing
Eternal sleep, heaven
Death
Sun
Bright, Yellow
Burning, blinding, spinning
Warm sunshine, energy
Shining, mesmerizing, calming
Dark, peaceful
Moon
Sanity
Clear,rational
Thinking, wondering, exploring
Open eyes and mind
Crumbling, falling, fearing
Unbalanced, Mad
Insanity
Cats
ReplyDeleteLazy, furry
Sleeping, Playing, Relaxing
Idle, Energetic
Playing, Running, Barking
Active, Crazy
Dogs
Spring
Warm, Sunny
Enjoying, Warming, Blooming
Fun, Boring
Boring, Freezing, Skiing
Cold, Dark
Winter
Rock Music
Fast, Fun
Enjoying, Understanding, Brightening
Amazing, Horrible
Horrifying, Boring, Disgusting
Bad, Pointless
Rap Music
ReplyDeleteLove,
Beautiful, passionate,
Growing, craving, maturing,
Happily ever-after, cold-hearted
Harming, raging, destroying,
Empty, hostile,
Hate
Light,
Joyful, bright,
Awakening, eye-opening, sparkling
Daytime memories, nighttime terrors
Depressing, darkening, scaring,
Gloomy, black
Dark
Deep
Meaningful, bottomless,
Continuing, swallowing, discerning,
Ocean floors, Rain puddles
Lacking, growing, destroying,
Care-free, facile
Shallow
ReplyDeleteFriends
Fun, Funny
Playing, Enjoying, Laughing
Heaven, Limbo
Boring,Waiting, Frightening
Scary, Empty
Alone
Planes
High, Big
Frightening, Flying, Landing
Clouds, Land
Waiting, Boring, Stopping
Small, Slow
Cars
Dream
Happy, Fun
Enjoying, Neverlasting, Upsetting
Happy Land, Worst Place
Everlasting, Hurtful,Waiting
Dark, Scary
Nightmare
Greetings
ReplyDeleteWaves, smiles
Welcoming, rejoicing, exciting
Warm hugs, wet tears
Crying, weeping, hugging
Sorrowful, Emotional
Goodbyes
Diamond
ReplyDeleteBright, Precious
Shining, Dazzling, Glistening
Magnificently Admired, Unimpressively Viewed
Unpleasing, Uninteresting, Boring
Dull, Ugly
Rock
Old
Wise, Experienced
Reminiscing, Pondering, Contemplating
Elderly Lady, Youthful Adolescent
Living, Laughing, Loving
Foolish, Careless
Young
Past
Memories, Regrets
Haunting, Embarrassing, Enduring
Yesterday’s Mistakes, Tomorrow’s Emends
Hoping, Planning, Anticipating
Goals, Ambition
Future
City
ReplyDeleteLoud, Busy
Beeping, Speeding, Glowing
Tall Skyscrapers, Crashing Waves
Burning, Swimming, Walking
Quiet, Hot
Beach
Summer
Hot, Humid
Swimming, Tanning, Running
Vacation house, Christmas Decorations
Shoveling, Baking, Snowing
Cold, Snow
Winter
Happy
Giggles, Glow
Laughing, Smiling, Loving
A big Smile, A huge Frown
Frowning, Crying, Hurting
Upset, Tears
Sad