Example of iambic
pentameter:
The da-DUM of a human
heartbeat is the most common example of this rhythm.
A standard line of
iambic pentameter is five iambic feet in a row:
da DUM da DUM da DUM
da DUM da DUM
The tick-TOCK rhythm
of iambic pentameter can be heard in the opening line of Shakespeare's Sonnet
12:"When I do count the clock that tells the time”
Our Canine Paladin
We're sure the robbers
shudder in the night (a)
just thinking of our canine paladin, (b)
while Lucy sniffs the air for signs of plight, (a)
in every nook and cranny that's within (b)
her boundaries, in case intruders might (a)
ignore the risk of scratched or punctured skin. (b)
Alas, we've seen the mighty Lucy hide (c)
behind us when she hears a noise outside.(c)
just thinking of our canine paladin, (b)
while Lucy sniffs the air for signs of plight, (a)
in every nook and cranny that's within (b)
her boundaries, in case intruders might (a)
ignore the risk of scratched or punctured skin. (b)
Alas, we've seen the mighty Lucy hide (c)
behind us when she hears a noise outside.(c)
Portraying
fearlessness is just a show,
for terriers project their self-esteem
for all to see, from breeding long ago,
they are the leaders of their home regime.
From safety Lucy barks to let them know
to keep this house apart from any scheme,
but with a simple knock she hits the floor
with body wags for any at the door.
for terriers project their self-esteem
for all to see, from breeding long ago,
they are the leaders of their home regime.
From safety Lucy barks to let them know
to keep this house apart from any scheme,
but with a simple knock she hits the floor
with body wags for any at the door.
Sometimes you feel lonely in this place
ReplyDeleteA day comes and everyone is against you
You feel like you are the in a race
Every time I think it’s my boo
I would do anything to chase
You, since that day my love grew
You’re the love I need
I want to love you and make seeds.
She’s the only girl I love
I would do anything for her
Ask the god above
I want to concur
Her heart; I’m so sick of
Dreaming that I’m holding your hand but it’s a glove
I love her I really need you
Would you like to be my boo?
No one is real
So just be who you are
I think I made this clear
I can’t wait to get my car
My birthday is on the 20th so everyone cheer
One thing I don’t got and that is fear
No one could ever stop me from smiling
No one can push me I would never be falling.
I smoke on that good
No one can stop me from blowing it
If you don’t smoke you think I should?
Yeah nothing to say so shut up and sit
I be riding around the hood
My car be packed there’s nowhere to fit
I don’t care what people say
They just jealous they over there trying to figure out what’s bengay.
Format is incorrect, but I like the feel of it. I especially enjoyed the bengay line. Make sure everything stays appropriate. :)
DeleteI step out and feel the humidity
ReplyDeleteA second later and it starts to pour out
I can feel my immense stupidity
I left my jacket and I am locked out
I must go forth, soaked, moving steadily
My shoes are damaged, the raindrops I count
I get to my destination slowly
Tomorrow should be better, hopefully
The same old routine every single day
Wake up, go to school, wake up, go to school
For ten months every day is the same way
What if I want to relax and play pool?
Im getting real tired, please go away
There is a lot of homework to do, fool
One day it will end and I’ll be happy
But I’ll miss all my friends, I’ll be sappy
Excellent job. I like the humorous tone that this has in parts.
DeleteSummer only comes once throughout the year
ReplyDeleteJust a nice feel of that warm summer air
You’ve got to make the best when it’s still here
The sun will burn, so don’t look, and don’t stare
Summer may be ending, but don’t shed tears
Before it’s gone, act like you just don’t care
Go for a drive, don’t lose control, just steer
Have fun, go ahead and wrestle a bear
Go swimming, and enjoy it while it lasts
Cause pretty soon, this will all be the past
Sometimes the iambic pentameter doesn't really come through in the way it should be accented, but I really like the way the content really captures the essence of the summer.
Deleteregrets of the mind
ReplyDeletewe are always full of regrets
but we cannot think of that
we are human we cannot forget
the feeling is like the pressure of hittin a bat
things we can not reject
makes me want to hit a cat
things that always will foreshadow us
the things we do for lust
the fact that she is along side you
the things i would do to not have you near
than im giong to chill and have your friend too
but back than i had fear
girl stop and let me get food
im just giong to boo you
why your madd take a shot
and remember the fine night we had last night
remember that time we had at the park
when everything was good full of smiles
now you got someone else getting you in the lot
how does that feel with all them lies
now im the only one smiling or not
now its just a good bye
This is entertaining, but it doesn't even come close to being the appropriate format.
DeleteA mother should not hate her girl
ReplyDeleteShe needs to show her love
Her girl should be a lovely pearl
Sent from up above
She’s mean to watch her grow and twirl
And soar just like a dove
Instead the girl is lost in life
From the ignorance of her father’s wife
Delicious treats are something great
The taste so sweet and fun
But ice cream is a thing to hate
The lactose makes me run
It must taste good from a large crate
But instead I’ll eat a bun
It’s yummy, good and sweet
Lactose intolerance can’t be beat
Underneath the giant clock
The ticking hand still haunts
Two hours ‘til the time to rock
A place where one is free
Soon enough, go with the flock
Leave this boring tree
Out the door to the rock show
True fun’s what you will know
All good things eventually fade away
ReplyDeleteEven when we don’t want them to
Even when we want all the good things to extend their stay
Things are going good in your eyes
Then all of the sudden go into a disarray
Just as things are bright and bold
They slowly fade into grey
Sometimes there’s nothing you can do or say
I wonder what surprises the future has in store for us
Are you just as anxious as I am?
So far we’ve been pretty solid about trust
You’re my best friend
Our everyday communication is a must
Whether it lasts or not, we’ll still look back and smile
And it’s not about lust
Its believing in each other and making sure it won’t burn down to dust
I want to be left here alone in my bed
ReplyDeleteBut they insist on being at my side
All they give me is the feeling of dread
I was told I would get better, they lied
I wonder what would happen if I fled
Away from this place just so I could hide
This could be my chance, there is no one here
But my legs do not take me, out of fear
I curse them for leaving me in the room
Their actions are those of evil creatures
Stuck here until I face any doom
As I’m stuck here staring at their features
I lose all of my feelings but my gloom
As they stand over me like the teachers
My life will end within this padded cell
It feels like my soul is in a deep well
They keep me here because I am crazy
They call the padding my protection
All I can do here is sit lazily
And go into personal reflection
From their needle my vision gets hazy
They say it’s time for my selection
Will I leave this god forsaken building
NO, as my sprit floats to the celling
I LOVE this! My only criticism is that the feel of the iam0bic pentameter gets lost at times. The syllables are correct but the accents don't fall where they should. The content is fantastic though.
DeleteThe waiting of the sound of the tick-tock
ReplyDeleteThe rare special ones can only hear it
Look out there is a person on the dock
Don’t make a big move just go down and sit
Just leave it up to the saving rare cop
Gun is shot and there goes the first aid-kit
The blood pours out of the rare one, he’s gone
The cop has been shot and lays on the lawn
The bad guy runs away and hope is gone
Terror fills the place, no way to catch him
I run to hear the sound of nom, nom, nom
There I watch him and see the light get dim
I looked at him carefully to see Tim
Tim was taking out the tree, just a trim
He used to be my friend but that is now gone
He lays his head on the pillow like lawn
I go closer to him to see he’s dead
I see a cup that he drank on the floor
He lays on the floor like it is a bed
My heart sank it was completely tore
There on the floor was the blood that was red
I wished that I talked to him even more
Two people in one day slowly died
I have to say they had a bumpy ride
Things I Can't Explain
ReplyDeleteWe were more than best friends
We meant something to each other
I'm not the one that pretends
That we had feelings for one another
I'm not living my life full of regrets
What I had with you is something i want to recover
I might have said some harsh words that I wish I can undue
At the end of the day you know I miss you
It’s a decision we both had to make
To go our separate ways and never look back again
We’ll have many memories to take
Everywhere we go, it’s insane
After two years things we’re finally getting a break
Yelling & screaming, it all went down the drain
We both gave each other a headache
I wish this was fake
You took forever to make up your mind
I'm not wasting my time on that
This is just a sign
I don't know what you're trying to get at
I used to be blind
You're a typical guy with those famous lines
I wish you the best
I thought you were better than the rest
I like the subject matter, but the format is incorrect.
DeleteI waited for the sun to rise
ReplyDeleteStarting of a brand new day
I waited for the end of all the lies
Your heart and mine begin to stray
Holding on to all of the goodbyes
How could I believe all that you did say
Our lives are coming to an end
My heart and yours will never mend
The ball is entering the net
My head is lowered facing towards the ground
The ball is placed on the goal line and I am set
I kick the ball without making a sound
Always taught about a quick reset
Looking for defenders all around
Waiting for the ball to play in air
Our team not always playing fair
Pouring our all red like blood
My hands are shaking in a steady pace
It pours around me like a tiny flood
All my weapons hiding in a tiny space
Dumping his body in sickly mud
I clean it up without a single trace
Watching as the body starts to sink
They’ll never find the missing link
Format is incorrect. I have high hopes that we will get it right at some point this year.
DeleteWhen I do count the clock that tells the time
ReplyDeleteI choose to think that we can all believe.
When I do see that the clock can be mine
I read and look to know that time is lean.
I don’t waste it to get the best of signs
But what the clock says is not simply seen.
What is around the clock tells us to look
And not to be obscured by what was took.
Behind the clock we see the old brown wall
It helps us know how much was done right here.
The man that was here years before the call
The man that caused his mom to drop in tears.
He stayed but cried because of what he saw.
It was to do with the war that he fought.
And what he did was all gone and for naught.
In the war he did just what was needed
But when he came back the change was crystal clear.
He could not say that he was now conceded.
The things he saw could make a man fear fear.
But as a strong person he could not cede
Just what had brought this fear so near.
It was the loss of his dear friends in battle
That made his soul do everything but rattle.
Wow, this is incredible. Very good.
Delete
ReplyDeleteOur generation has no sanity
We treat our family with no respect,
We only care about our vanity
And all we just want is to be perfect
We don’t care about our humanity
And all the things we do are incorrect
Why do we do things that cause shame to us?
Only to cause others to show disgust.
To show courage is a habit we have
Only to back down when it really counts
A little thin. Were we using our time wisely?
DeleteHer feet were planted in the ground
ReplyDeleteLike roots entangled in the earth
Her heartbeat was the only sound
This path had lain before her since her birth
Her coach stood near, his fingers wound
His smile wide, his laugh expressing mirth
Her heart was quickly skipping
Her sweat was slowly dripping
It was five minutes to go and they turned down the light
She felt an instant lift about her mood
She stepped out into the arena and it all went bright
She felt their applause, as they wooed
She was lifted to an all new height
Accomplishing everything that had managed to elude
This is what she was destined
To do, she would now be legend
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ReplyDeleteHis name is Felix the great
ReplyDeleteHe loves his girlfriend
And he is way older than eight
If you need help he has a hand to lend
If he goes fishing he has good bate
And if you need a man, he is the one to send
The man, the legend, his name is Felix
If you go for a fight with him, it’s like walking into a helix
Tyler plays football
His brain started to bleed
He is not tall
Better players is what he needs
He talks about it in the hall
But in the game, he doesn’t lead
In his last game he cracked a kid
And he almost broke his lid
I am the man
I am a king
I have a great tan
Google, not bing
I was never in the klan
Crack I do not sling
I have a lot of muscle
If you call me out, we’ll have a tussle
The night is long and cold
ReplyDeleteI like the color red
The trees are covered with mold
I love to lie down in my bed
The owls scold
However I like to shred
I dislike school
Because it is very uncool
The hero is the knight
The villain is the beast
He fights the monster even though it bites
It begins to feast
He begins to take delight
The beast fleas to the east
No more shall the beast attack
Because it will never be coming back
My boys are Felix and Jon
I like them a lot
And so on
I think they are very hot
I picture Jon as a swan
And Felix has a big yacht
Both are very big and strong
Unfortunately they both wear thongs
The farther I stray from home
ReplyDeleteThen the farther I stray from the light
I don’t know where to roam
To escape this blight
Just like the empire of Rome
I will awake with a fright
To see that I am lost
And will eventually know the cost
I go in the room to sit down on the chair
I look at computer and start to write
I take in a big gust of air
And look outside at the sky at night
Up at the stars when I ask the question where
Where can I find his might
To help me through this day
And through all this month of May
I see the plant lay underneath the sun
Sitting there consuming its rays
Waiting there having fun
Until it goes into a haze
Where it sits until it is done
And then it goes on its way
But it can’t really go anywhere
Because it was eaten by a bear
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ReplyDeleteWhen the boy was young he admired that red caped man
ReplyDeleteWho would go and continuously save the day
A person so strong he could lift a van
And villains would not be able to slay
A hero who constantly had a clever battle plan
And would be victorious through every fray
A man like this the boy wanted to be
To restore justice, everyone would see
As the boy grew, he began to fight crime
From cleaning up trash, to punishing any wrongdoer
The boy began to clean the cities grime
He made his city better, nothing could be truer
But before long, he saw the government as slime
And decided to give them what was duer.
He prepared to enact war against authority
And made this his first priority
Eliminating people to achieve his goal
He began to terrify the folks
Angered with the boy, they declared he had no soul
To rally people against the boy, the government began to coax
Trapping the young boy, they made him pay for his crimes in whole
Enraged at the boy’s treachery the call him a hoax
Putting him in chains, they send him to prison
But the boy didn’t fret, for another hero shall be risen
The tall forest trees look down upon me
ReplyDeleteThe moment I stopped I saw their large eyes
I stared back up at them curiously
I blinked twice from the mysterious sight
I found no strangeness from what I could see
Continuing my stroll down the long trail
I knew this journey would be an odd tale
My legs became sore as the sun sank low
But I continued my walk through the scene
I saw a river flowing rather slow
The clear water sparkled with a bright gleam
The water was silky, a satin bow
As I ran my fingers through the cold stream
Before I left, I saw a school of fish
To have their freedom was my only wish
At last the night had finally arrived
The sky had darkened to a purple hue
I wore a smile, observing the stars thrive
I took a moment to think about you
At this time, I finally felt alive
The soft magic of night utterly true
Embracing the silence and peace was sweet
Only the night was such a lovely treat
The fearless words said by one man
ReplyDeletePut away to avoid his death
A new god history began
Sealed in a cave to hide his breath
With a fake stone that was the plan
When he grew he would show his wrath
With a start of a legacy
His fight gave us the galaxy
To the children of my future
I won’t miss the day you are born
You will never feel my torture
Me and your mom will not be torn
When you feel alone ill be there
Having you in my arms I yearn
Even when you’re bad I will love you
My child I can’t wait to meet you
This is a very cool poem, mistakes aside. However, it does not even come close to the proper format.
DeleteIt’s been told a million times before
ReplyDeleteThe same tale we’ve all come to know
Sucks you in a world of fantasy and lore
A place where people have gone since years ago
Can listen until your ears turn sore
And changes with you as you grow
Filled with magic and true love
Fairytales written in the stars above
It explains to you about life
The best and worst ways it could be
Seeing both the victory and the strife
Teaching us to always stay and never flee
We fight whether hope is scarce or rife
It’s the only way you can set yourself free
Good versus evil is the classic fight
The victor is always on the side of right
Call it a cliché and say you don’t care
It has the power to touch everyone’s heart
Can make you feel safe or give you a scare
Whether you’re with your loved ones or apart
Finding a tale such as this one is rare
Every good legend begins at the start
So you can put on your own spin
No matter what goodness will always win
The castle sits among the fallen snow
ReplyDeleteThe wintery breeze blows around my hair
I can see the forest out my window
My cold castle room feels like my own lair
I hear talks of all British lingo
I am not used to this cold British air
The castle at Wroxton College is home
In this brand new country where I’m alone
The fallen leaves cover the stagnant lake
The signs of fall are all around us now
Now that summer is gone I need a break
Look there goes a female dairy cow
Once the leaves fall falling will be snowflakes
Instead of rake you will need a snowplow
The changing from summer to autumn time
The was really hard to find words to rhyme
The falling water crashes to the ground
The luscious plants surround the water’s edge
The water makes a great thunderous sound
The water will feed the surrounding hedge
The roaring sound makes the birds fly around
The crabs try to escape, in rocks they wedge
The waterfall is very powerful
Falling with the force of a big strong bull
Emotions are not meant to get poked at
ReplyDeleteIt can have many effects
Makes people eat and get fat
People get news of reject
Than they cry in their lap
Having ideas of regret
Life starts becoming clueless
Lose everything and become shoeless
Having no one there for you
Trying to get everything back to the way it used to be
Not having any idea where to go too
Wanting to have the heart that matched the key
Trying to understand what to do
Memories of them having tea
Starting to make doubts
Creating love shouts
Time is running out
Got to make your move fast
Don’t go out with a pout
Forget about the pass
Control is something you cannot obtain
ReplyDeleteControlling someone else is a game that you cannot win
Try to control a fire spitter and you will be slain
Do not sit there and tell them what they are doing is a sin
Why do you have to bring down everyone’s parade with rain?
Once everyone will lock you out of their lives and never let you in
And soon a question will come
One that will make you look completely stupid maybe even dumb
Who are you to tell me how to live my life?
When did I agree on a dictator instead of a democracy?
I don’t need you in my ear like a nagging wife
That’s all just a nuisance for me
When I let loose all my anger on you it will have the sharp pain close to a knife
And there will be no time for you to flee
So step back and take a seat
Be a passenger and keep your mouth closed in defeat
I wish to run my own life like the rest of the world
I no longer need a filter
especially not a physical one that will keep my mind swirled
Don’t collect all my power and tried to sew together like a quilter
And lock it away in or even let it be hurled
Into a place that my fire my burn some random person like him or her
Just let me be
And don’t ever try to control me
she won the great battle atleast
ReplyDeleteshe over came the great dragon
she needs help from someone like the priest
the battle ends with a wagon
the numorous towns people ciest
people eatten by the dragon
the people sit here and morn
and they are gi8ven some corn
The great queen of hearts is very mad
all because the frog ate her food
this made the queen very sad
and put here in a cranky mood
she ended up wearing plaid
which icked the queen off a tad
the queen said off with his head
and went happily upstairs to bed
It was a cold night
ReplyDeleteThe flames of death filled the sky
There was an awful sight
The flames grew very high
the face of many people filled with fright
Evil stretched and children cry
The evil in the air
Where is this hero so fine and fair?
As the air grew thin
As the flames grew tall
Where is that hero with a grin
Why hasn’t he answered our call
Evil is tarring our skin
Crushing our wall
And hurting our soul
with a traitorous goal
Oh where Oh where is this man
Who will save us from this smoke
Who will help us from this evil plan
Who will not choke
and will get us out of this mess
when really the hero is us