Monday, September 10, 2012

Lune

The lune is a three-line poem with a specific syllable count (3,5,3) in each line. Its format is based on the Haiku, with changes in the amount of syllables to accommodate the style of the English language. Traditionally, these poems were meant to express a simple truth, and usually incorporated nature. You may write your lunes on any topic you like.

Please write 10 lunes. They are due at the end of the period.

6 comments:

  1. Wintertime
    White snow is falling
    Coldness

    September
    It is time for school
    Getting cold

    Wind blowing
    Leaves dancing around
    Trees shaking

    Library
    Electric printer
    Ms. Greczek

    Cold pink
    It's bright and vibrant
    Nail Color

    Text message
    A sign of the times
    Teenage

    Fountain drink
    A Coca-Cola
    Refreshing

    Be clean
    Hand Sanitizer
    Please shower

    Kerry J.
    Funny, athletic
    Blue eyes

    Erin M.
    Doesn't do a lot
    Sits around

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  2. 1.Simple days
    keep me from breaking
    simple me

    2.poetry
    An escape for me
    Help me please

    3.I am free
    this is all i need
    let her be

    4.the wind blows
    the world is at peace
    run away

    5.flowers grow
    people sometimes grow
    but at heart

    6.Simple truth
    no one speaks it now
    no one knows

    7.After work
    calmly she's asleep
    peace at once

    8.No one sees
    who i used to be
    I am me

    9.Please help her
    she can not see how
    A lost soul

    10. He is hell
    Ge us tge devil
    Satan's son

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  3. 1) Who am I
    That I am someone
    In your eyes
    2) The beating
    Of my heart is like
    A small drum
    3) The tree bends
    But never breaks down
    For it’s strong
    4) You are holy
    And you are strong when
    I need help
    5) I might fall
    But I will always
    Rise again
    6) The wind howls
    And thunder crashes
    Down on me
    7) Sitting here
    Waiting for the bell
    To free me
    8) Something’s wrong
    With the world these days
    It is mad
    9) The flag stands
    Never wavering
    Never fails
    10) Blank paper
    Can be a writer’s
    Masterpiece

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  4. 1. Watching stars
    While on the moist grass
    Before dawn

    2. Sitting down
    Watching people live
    With no cares

    3. In the night
    We relive our fears
    All alone

    4. The gold sun
    Warms us with its rays
    So we live

    5. The water
    Ripples with small waves
    Breaking peace

    6. Memory
    Keeps those we lost near
    And loved

    7. Rain falls down
    Keeping children in
    From playing

    8. Family
    A group of people
    Who love you

    9. Silently
    The pure white snow falls
    From dark clouds

    10. Little bugs
    Crawl across the earth
    Living on

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  5. 1. I love storms
    Loud and crashing fun
    Good chaos

    2. People talk
    Much, much too often
    Shut your mouth

    3. Don’t touch me
    Unpleasant classmates
    Move faster

    4. Pretty birds
    Where do you fly to?
    Take me there

    5. Flowers bloom
    Feel the soft spring air
    Drift away

    6. A rainbow heart
    Sewn to her sleeve, that
    None can see

    7. Time flies fast
    Heart engulfed by love
    Next to you

    8. Summertime
    Have you left us now?
    Welcome fall
    9
    . Leaves as crisp
    As the air they’re in
    Perfect time

    10. Native friend
    We demand some food
    Now you die

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  6. Underneath
    The swaying palm tree
    I feel peace

    I may have
    Consumed way too much
    Clear water

    You stand there
    With tears on my face
    “Say goodbye.”

    Tensions rise
    Between you and me
    Breaking point

    I have to
    Go to the bathroom
    After this

    I won’t know
    What it feels like to
    Be the one

    What will come
    Of the years that are
    Undetermined

    Together
    We face the music
    Hand in hand

    Underneath
    This skin lives a soul
    Strengthening

    Strive for it
    Your greatest, your best
    And grab it

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