Lune
The lune is a three-line poem with a specific syllable count (3,5,3) in each line. Its format is based on the Haiku, with changes in the amount of syllables to accommodate the style of the English language. Traditionally, these poems were meant to express a simple truth, and usually incorporated nature. You may write your lunes on any topic you like.
Please write 10 lunes. They are due at the end of the period.
Please write 10 lunes. They are due at the end of the period.
1.) Hangs from trees.
ReplyDeleteSleeps every day.
Sloths don’t move.
2.) Break the wave.
Sail through the challenge.
Counter fear.
3.) Changing scene.
Soaring rapidly.
Life goes on.
4.) Stormy skies.
Ferocious rain drops.
Hurricanes.
5.) Stop the noise.
Let the quiet in.
Breath of peace.
6.) Striking scene.
Reflecting sun’s rays.
Nature calls.
7.) Green roofing.
Moist soil beneath feet.
Calm jungle.
8.) Lying down.
Crashing waves on shore.
Soothing feel.
9.) Walking tall.
Making up your mind.
Survival.
10.) Powers on.
Moves at speed of light.
The city.
Really good job on these. I love numbers 6 and 10.
Delete1. I want you
ReplyDeleteJust a time of need
Please come back
2. I’m sorry
I had to trust you
It’s my fault
3. Can I leave?
All I do is hurt
Time can help
4. Get me out
I am trapped inside
Let me leave
5. I can’t hear
Too many voices
6. Let me leave
Can I get out
Come back please
7. Vanity
People just want it
Let it go
8. Rain falls down
It can always stop
Time can’t stop
9. A tear falls
Pain will go away
Face my pain
10. Fall apart
My heart weeps for you
Come back please
These make me sad. Good job.
DeleteYou and me
ReplyDeleteIt’s the way to be
Together
Chatterbox
A mouth that won’t stop
Please stop it
You’re yelling
Unnecessary
Please calm down
Live like love
Like you could lose it
Don’t let go
Close it out
Like you close your door
Forget it
Do not fret
It will be alright
Don’t give up
Make life last
Life is a present
Not to waste
This weekend
I really can’t wait
Hurry up!
Where to go
When there is no place
Run away
Close it out
Like you close your door
Forget it
Live like love is great. This is what you are capable of.
DeleteTruth is all.
ReplyDeleteIt lets one be free.
My freedom
Great is thee,
Thee who fills my heart.
Come to me.
Little girl,
You are so very sad.
Please don’t cry.
You are mine.
You are mine to keep.
Stay with me.
I love you.
I love all of you;
Everything.
So fearful.
I am not ready.
But time flies.
Time goes by;
It’s too quick for me.
Can’t keep up.
Tears fall down.
My heart breaks apart.
I’m ruined.
Love is pain.
It gets your hopes up,
And it leaves.
Comprehend
Please, understand me,
Cause I don’t.
I absolutely love numbers 1,8,9, and 10
Delete1. The disappear
ReplyDeleteof the wretched town
the tears shed
2. Love and war
the world is breaking
who will help?
3. Great friendship
bond formed out of love
two of us
4. The sunrise
showing us new hope
in a world so dark
5. The sun sets
beach and ocean clears
breathtaking
6. Family feud
the death of two souls
united
7. Keys typing
the gears turn and twist
words appear
8. The tears fall
the poor sister stares
blood dripping
9. Ring sparkles
the sun shines brightly
joy tears fall
10. The story
the words unspoken
forbidden
1. The despair
Deleteof the wretched town
the tears shed
Number 7 is awesome!
Deleteon seven the last sentence is supposed to be worlds appear (sorry)
DeleteWhat I want
ReplyDeleteIs what I can’t have
Why can’t I?
People do
Well it seems like it
They’re lucky
I want luck
I’m deprived of it
How tragic
I’m at lost
Looking to be found
But I’m not
I go up
Just to get pulled down
Now I’m down
I’m in search
It seems so easy
It is not
I want it
I’m striving for it
Not there yet
I wonder
Why I’m wanting what
I can’t have
I don’t know
I have no answer
I just want
I’ll get it
One day, I know it
I hope soon.
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DeleteAgain, a sense of yearning here. So artfully conveyed. Love your work.
DeleteLunes
ReplyDeleteFreedom is
A mere state of mind
Nothing more
Musty air
Disgusting with weight
And moisture
Nemesis
The bane of being
Eternal
Fiction is
Just something that you
Don’t believe
The unseen
Will you believe it?
Have some faith
Collapsing
Deteriorate
Fade away
A Dream World
Filled with corruption
A Nightmare
Canada
America’s hat
Wonderful
Destruction
A Baron Wasteland
End of time
The button
Good and bad will come
Will you press?
Love this! So good.
DeleteClouded skies
ReplyDeleteKeeps away the sun.
Darkness comes.
The sunshine,
Brightens up the world.
It brings warmth.
Delicious,
Caramel flavored,
Hot coffee.
Chocolate
Bar, cake, or ice cream
Happiness.
Tomorrow.
May be different.
Yesterday.
I hug you,
To show you my love,
I kiss you.
I listen,
To you carefully.
We both learn.
My baby
Is Ja’uan Donte.
I love him.
A loser,
You are because, you
Are not fun.
The future,
Sometimes comes unseen
Secretly.
I like the coffee one the best.
DeleteJust do it
ReplyDeleteA Nike slogan
Live by it
History
It was never good
I still fail
Basketball
Flying down the court
Draining shots
Steak is beef
Beef is a problem
Don’t have beef
Chemistry
With Mister Chapman
Exciting
Basketball
Draining every shot
Excitement
Reference
A dictionary
Could be on
Newspapers
Periodicals
News givers
I love you
ReplyDeleteLove is everything
I want you
Please help me
This is really hard
Can’t do it
Dogs are cute
I have one dog
I love him
My boyfriend
Trey songz is so cute
He loves me
Emily
She is my friend
She is weird
I hate it
Creative writing
It is hard
Im tired
I want my blanket
And pillow
Where are you
Why are you absent
Whatever
Sweet and nice
I love my nephew
So little
I wrote ten
This is my last one
Finally
1. I hate this
ReplyDeleteI do not like this
I don’t like
2. He was dead
No longer living
Gone he was
3. Let me go
School sucks I hate it
Let me out
4. Time goes by
So slowly it goes
Go faster
5. Melissa
Is so nice to me
She is weird
6. Who are you
Where are you going
What is this
7. where are we
Why are we here now
Can we go
8. I’m happy
I am so happy
Very glad
9. life is sad
So sad is this life
Why is it
10. help me please
Almost done with this
Finally
Help!!!!
Delete1) Nights we spend
ReplyDeleteon the Jersey shore
to wash pain.
2) You hear me
we see each other
I feel you
3) Touch my back
I'll touch your fortune
Bite softly
4) Take a breath
I'll take away life
Moments gap
5) Trees whistle
Crickets wings sound
Nature sighs
6) She agrees
Quivering with thirst
We achieve
7) Greatness last
The hourglass turns
It began
8) Atmosphere
Smoother than a grape
Full like mangos
9) Fire rise
She refuse to lie
It closer
10) I take charge
She closes her eyes
It's over.
#3 is incredible.
Delete#8 is incredible.
#10 too. What a gift.
Ryan P. Tunison
ReplyDeleteAll is lost
To remain hopeless
Forever
Do not trust
The forceful hand fate
To guide you
Savannah
Goddess-like beauty
Above all
You’re taken
I do not persist
But will wait
Lacks courage
To fulfill his right
To love Her
She denies
Will always insist
Will not love
You don’t claim
To forever love
Or cherish
Silhouette
Of Herself now gone
Forever
Tomorrow
Shall come with joyful
News of death
Now in Her
A heart to hold close
Just don’t go
The second to last one really catches my attention. A lot of troubled love in these.
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ReplyDeleteSoft and cold
ReplyDeleteThe bear cuddles up
With his mom
Things get hard
Life has ups and downs
It goes on
He saved her
From terrors around
True hero
An Apple
Is red and juicy
Bite quickly
I am blonde
I have blue eyes too
Jaime Rose
Man in mirror
What is it you see?
Reflection?
Hearts shatter
In such deep despair
For loved ones
Red White Blue
Colors of freedom
But cops too
Big blue eyes
And a crooked smile
Marked her face
I hate school
People annoy me
I want sleep
Soft and cold
The bear cuddles up
With his mom
Things get hard
Life has ups and downs
It goes on
He saved her
From terrors around
True hero
An Apple
Is red and juicy
Bite quickly
I am blonde
I have blue eyes too
Jaime Rose
Mirror man
What is it you see?
Reflection?
Hearts shatter
In such deep despair
For loved ones
Red White Blue
Colors of freedom
But cops too
Big blue eyes
And a crooked smile
Marked her face
I hate school
People annoy me
I want sleep
Hello there
ReplyDeleteMy name is Morgan
This is hard
Do not hate
Appreciate more
Life to love
I read books
They are amazing,
An escape
I’m trying
To broaden my views
Living life
Writing’s fun
I do it a lot
Not this way
To protect
One must let go of
Who they love
Sun and moon
As different as
Flame and ice
To love is
Never letting go
Of the truth
The leaves fall
I can smell pumpkin
Fall as come
I hope for
A better life where
We all care
The red dog
ReplyDeleteWas a foolish dog
And ate food.
The wind blows
Softly as the back
Porch makes noise.
I run ten
Laps around the park.
I’m tired.
The halls are
Quiet and the school
Is empty.
The book I
Read was about a
boy who died.
I fear that
I will fail classes
That I need.
Abigail
Jane Elizabeth
Hunnewell
It is two
O’clock and I can’t
Think anymore.
Laurel Anne
Bing Xin Hunnewell:
My sister.
The green leaves
Grow on my favorite
Trees in Maine.
What do you want me to say?
DeleteThis should clear things up:
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Temptation
ReplyDeleteOvercomes our will
And slays us
The wind blows
Shakes us to our souls
And we feel
Waterfalls
Flow majestically
Amongst us
Cat steals food
Refuses to yield
And we starve
The bird flies
High above the ground,
Astound us
You are very good at these short forms. You capture the essence of what the form is meant for. You serve up something with depth in each one.
DeleteSeconds click
DeleteAway from our lives
Forever
Why is it
That if we but try
We’re weary?
Music plays
It overwhelms and
Captivates
Secretly
They share their stories
Full of shame
The sheep graze
In their calm pastures
Which own them
Trees dance in the wind
ReplyDeleteTheir green leaves swaying
They stand tall and proud
Clear restless water
Turns into a roaring ocean
Waves crash violently
Fiery ball lights the sky
Bringing warmth everywhere on earth
It creates life
Forget it
ReplyDeleteMove on from the past
Not worth it
Summertime.
Oh, how you are missed
Come back soon
Be young, wild
Be free of worries
Enjoy life.
So gentle,
Caring, Lovely, Kind.
Do not change.
A blessing
A true miracle
Brand new life
Crooked smile.
Don’t let them see you
Down, ever.
Fall has come,
Kaleidoscopic.
Change has come.
Still don’t know
Why I love you so.
Divine sin.
Temptation,
Challenging our will.
Must fight it.
Thirst-quenching,
Tasty, refreshing,
Peach Iced Tea
Loving life
ReplyDeleteNew things everyday
Happiness
Loving him
Brings me happiness
Everyday
Smiling
As i remember
The good times
Music playing
Feeling the bass hit
enjoying
Hug and kiss
Pulling me closer
Loving me
Aunts are like
Sisters who love and
Care like mom
Sitting alone
Thinking of the past
Bad memories
Writing in
The journal of bad
memories
Shining bright
Stars twinkling in the
Nighttime sky
Finding the
Beauty in the world
Is amazing
1. Open your eyes
ReplyDeleteNow look around you
Now close them
2.
3. Had to make
A bunch of cool lunes
This is two
4.
5. Mr. Lynch
I used his name for
No reason
6.
7. Butterfly
Flutter through the sky
Carry joy
8.
9. The ocean
Washes me over
Brings me peace
10.
11. Do you care?
The environment
It’s dying
12.
13. Make a wish
Just believe in you
Stay truthful
14.
15. Please have faith
Don’t ever give up
You could win
16.
17. Ice water
The deepest of blues
Frozen touch
18.
19. What’s a name
Just a plain title
It’s not you
ignore the numbers
Delete1. It is dark
ReplyDeleteI see the bright stars
They shine bright
2. It’s Autumn
The leaves are bright red
There falling
3. The snow falls
The colors is pure white
It is cold
4. English class
We read many books
Like Gatsby
5. The color blue
The color of the sky
Its light blue
6. I’m broken
My heart is shattered
I can’t feel
7. I am sad
I cry at small things
Or big things
8. The school year
Is going by fast
We graduate
9. I can’t leave
I need to go on
Keep going
10. I’m happy
I can’t believe it
I am done