Ceiling
Limousine
Flashed
Leaving
Given
Only
Dedicated
Wish
Swollen
The
If
Night
Cradling
Inspecting
Ferocious
Pardon
Your
Blinds
Then
Faces
And
Dead
Gone
Of
For
With
A
Like
In
To
That
Shadows
Monday, February 11, 2013
Words, words, words! Breaking the Box
Your assignment is to take the following words, and ONLY the following words, and use the period to create a coherent poem with them. The idea of this assignment is to let your creativity be resourceful enough to overcome incredibly rigid parameters. It is due at the end of the period. You can repeat any of the words on the list.
Nymphs
Ceiling
Limousine
Flashed
Leaving
Given
Only
Dedicated
Wish
Swollen
The
If
Night
Cradling
Inspecting
Ferocious
Pardon
Your
Blinds
Then
Faces
And
Dead
Gone
Of
For
With
A
Like
In
To
That
Shadows
Ceiling
Limousine
Flashed
Leaving
Given
Only
Dedicated
Wish
Swollen
The
If
Night
Cradling
Inspecting
Ferocious
Pardon
Your
Blinds
Then
Faces
And
Dead
Gone
Of
For
With
A
Like
In
To
That
Shadows
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Nymphs cradling the dead,
ReplyDeleteDedicated to the dead,
The nymphs leaving in the shadows,
And gone in a ferocious night.
Given a wish,
The wish of the dead.
Pardon the nymphs,
The dead, Ferocious
Blinds the Nymphs
Flashed, leaving the ceiling
Flashed, if like a limousine
Your ferocious dead
Only swollen dead with dead
The dead, inspecting the Nymphs
Then, leaving the dead nymphs
For the dead, with dead
If only the shadows flashed
ReplyDeleteWith ferocious nymphs
And dedicated a night
To pardon the dead
Cradling in the faces
Of swollen nymphs
That blinds the shadows
Like a limousine blinds the dead
For inspecting your gone
The ceiling flashed
And given a wish
The shadows then leaving
If only the shadows flashed
Awesome job.
DeleteGHOSTS OF HOLLYWOOD
ReplyDeleteDead and gone
Faces flashed
In the limousine
Like nymphs of the night
Dedicated to the swollen ceiling
Inspecting,
Cradling with a ferocious wish
That then blinds
If given your pardon
Leaving only shadows for faces
Nymphs faces swollen and dead
ReplyDeleteLeaving like a shadow; gone
Given only your dedicated wish
In the night of ferocious flashed limousines.
That ceiling cradling with blinds
Then pardon if inspecting for
Some clarity problems here, but good effort.
DeleteNymphs cradling dead nymphs
ReplyDeleteFaces to the ceiling
Limousine flashed the shadows
Only ferocious nymphs in the night
Then a wish:
Blinds,
The wish
A ferocious wish
Nymphs pardon nymphs
Dedicated for a wish
Inspecting faces
Given dead and swollen nymphs
Nymphs wish for shadows
Gone with the flashes of the shadows
Nymphs dedicated,
Shadows like a wish
A wish of blinds
That flashes your wish
Well done. I like this.
Delete
ReplyDeleteIf only the night faces the dead
Given the dead swollen faces
That limousine cradling in like ferocious shadows
Pardon the inspecting in the ceiling
Dedicated to leaving the shadows to
The night leaving to the ferocious dead
The shadows flashed like dedicated blinds
A wish nymphs dead faces in the night
A few lines don't work, but there are some moments here where you executed well.
DeleteThe night blinds the ferocious shadows
ReplyDeleteLeaving dead faces in the ceiling
The limousine blinds the inspecting nymphs
Dedicated to only a wish
Cradling the dead shadows
Gone with the swollen faces
Give that pardon for the faces
Given and if the ceiling flashed
Then the shadows like the nymphs
And of that wish
Excellent. Vivid and intense.
DeleteThe shadows
ReplyDeleteThe faces of the dead
Leaving for the night
If the ceiling pardons your wish
Then the ferocious nymphs
The nymphs in a limousine
Like the limousine
A limousine given
To the nymphs
And the blinds flashed
Inspecting the nymphs
The dedicated nymphs and with swollen faces
And if the cradling nymphs
Leaving and gone
Only a wish that blinds
Solid job. I'm impressed. Your repetition is effective.
DeleteDedicated to the only given a wish in the night
ReplyDeleteInspecting dead faces
In the shadows like blind faces
Nymphs ceiling and limousine flashed in the night
If your ferocious pardon with faces
Then the swollen faces gone like a shadow
Blinds your faces and for cradling like that
Leaving in to the shadows for gone
A lot of this doesn't work, but you made a solid effort.
DeleteYou’re dead and gone
ReplyDeleteOnly leaving night giving shadows
You’re dedicated to night and only night
You’re dead nymphs
Leaving Cradling faces with a swollen wish
Your pardons then you’re dead and gone
You’re like a limousine
Dead and gone
Your ferocious for night
To the dead leaving shadows
Your flashed with dead
Your dead and gone
For your wish inspecting your dead
If your only blinds with death
Dead to the faces
Like a leaving night
The faces of the dead giving in a shadow
In the night of the dead
Your wish that dedicated your blinds for death
In a swollen wish
Your dead and gone
Be careful with your and you're.
DeleteIf your flashed shadows only dedicated a wish to the dead like the ferocious faces given to the nymphs inspecting the ceiling and of the limousine for your blinds gone that night and then leaving with pardon, cradling with swollen dead faces in a limousine.
ReplyDeleteThe swollen faces of nymphs
ReplyDeleteNight flashed leaving shadows
The nymphs ferocious, inspecting, and cradling
The nymphs wish for your pardon
The shadows flashed to the ceiling
Blinds the faces of the nymphs, dead and gone
Like leaving a limousine dedicated only for the dead nymphs
Then, if given your pardon
With that, the nymphs leaving in a limousine
In the swollen shadows of the night the ferocious faces that blinds your wish. Your dedicated wish of inspecting the dead. A wish leaving in a flashed limousine; gone. Only given to the cradling nymphs of the night. If, and only if your pardon then blinds the nymphs, then like a ferocious nymph is flashed to the ceiling.
ReplyDeleteYou did it! Good job.
DeleteInspecting faces Dead and Gone,
ReplyDeleteLeaving the ferocious night to pardon,
The Nymphs with dedicated shadows.
If your wish flashed like blinds,
The Nymph like a limousine,
Was leaving and then gone.
The Nymph, swollen, only in the face
Of that ceiling of the dead.
the night flashed like shadows
ReplyDeletemy limousine taken
with blinds
and dead nymphs in the ceeling
gone and deticated to the Ferocious night
your faces swollen
and given only the nymphs and the limousine
inspecting the limousine
cradling the nymphs
and wish for yor pardon
if only
ReplyDeleteNymphs flashed swollen ferocious faces
Leaving for the night in the limousine
The ceiling of the limousine gone do to the dead
Inspecting in the shadows to wish for life
Given only blind dedication for a pardon
Then with dedication like that they are given cradling life
If your lucky you see one in the shadows of the night before getting cradling life
The limousine, cradled by shadows
ReplyDeleteLeaving in to a ferocious night
Faces of nymphs dead and gone
Flashing from the shadows
Pardon given only for a wish
A wish that blinds
Like the swollen night
The Nymphs cradle in the night
ReplyDeleteSwollen, and wishing
For the limousine to leave
Only with that
And the shadows dead
The Nymphs faces can leave
Gone, to a ferocious inspection
Your pardon blinds the faces
Dedicated, to and given like the ceiling
Flashing, then your night
With the Nymphs of Wish
If your limousine leaves
Shadows cradling the dead
ReplyDeleteNight blinds your inspecting
Ferocious nymphs flashed in the shadows
Leaving only faces of the dead
For your pardon is only a wish
Dedicated to the swollen shadows
A ceiling of a limousine gone
Like the faces given to the dead
Like your dedicated inspecting
For that in the dead of night
If and then flashed in the shadows
With the pardon of the dead
Inspecting the dead
ReplyDeleteThe night flashed
In your faces
Your swollen shadows
The blinds and the ceiling gone
Like a leaving limousine
Given for the night
The nymphs cradling with a wish
Dedicated to the night
If only then
The nymphs pardon that wish
A ferocious wish
Of the night
the night ferocious
ReplyDeletenymphs only dedicated to cradiling
the swollen limousine
the ceiling flashed like shadows
then blinds your faces with a
wish for your given leaving pardon
for a dead nymph
if your of inspecting the shadows
and in that faces the ferocious shadows
then your dead and gone
The nymph in the night
ReplyDeleteLeaves the limousine
Cradling only the
Wishes dead and gone
A pardon in the shadows
For the blind dedication of a wish to death.
Then a face flashes in the ceiling
A face swollen like the shadows
A face ferocious like the night.
The nymph’s wishes dead with the night
Swollen in the cradle that you inspect in your blindness
Give you a wish in the night to leave
Then, a flash, and your blind wish
Is gone, leaving you dead.
Shadows of ferocious nymphs in the cradling night pardon your wish
ReplyDeleteOf dead and gone shadows.
The faces of the dedicated only flashed
In the leaving limousine of your wish.
Then the inspecting shadows blinds like a dedicated ceiling
With a swollen wish to like your shadows.
For if given that wish, pardon your dead wish.
Limousine of nymphs
ReplyDeleteLeaving night like shadows
You swollen wish
Of inspecting the dead
Of that dedicated to the shadows
Given only a wish
Gone in the nights
Gone in the shadows
Ferocious faces
If only the dead pardon the blinds
Inspecting the dead faces,
ReplyDeletewith ferocious shadows leaving
A dedicated night only for the dead
your wish flashed like the swollen shadows of the dead, only then the dead pardon.
The nymphs in the ceiling, cradling the dead faces.
The limousine blinds the given shadow.
The faces that flashed,
gone.
And with your wish
the dead, to, will pardon.
And Mordecai, if you somehow find your way back here, I’ll gladly tear your throat out myself. Dovi isn’t afraid of getting his hands dirty.
ReplyDeleteDovi’s eyes disappeared, fading into the abyss. Mordecai took a deep breath that was cut short as he saw the darkness invade his mouth and down his throat. His eyes began to tear up as he desperately tried to breathe through his nose, which also became under the darkness’ attack. He felt his body begin to fill with it. Finally released from the world’s grip, or perhaps forced down by it, he began to fall face first towards the rippling sea of emptiness. He closed his eyes as the darkness washed over his whole body. As it passed, his eyes were stung by a bright light. He opened them and found himself drenched in sweat in his room with a phrase bouncing around his skull, refusing to leave:
Never return.
Dedicated nymphs
ReplyDeletePardon the shadows
That flashed in the night
The faces of dead in the ceiling
Like ferocious shadows
Cradling the blinds of the limousine
Leaving a wish to swollen nymphs
If only a given wish
Gone with your limousine and the inspecting shadows
Then wish for the dead
One night, the phone rang clear and shrill. When I picked up, there was no voice on the line, but a loud peercing scream peerced through my ears. At first, I did not know what to think of this; was this call meant for me? Did I have to help or safe a soul? To my fright, I came to know it was my own voice! What was this? Was it a joke? I hung up the phone and tried to run out of my house, but it was hard to see where I went. My legs felt like dead weights, and I could not breathe.
ReplyDeleteWhen I made it to the door, the strong wind whooshed in my face, and whipped my hair, which stung. The weight I bared would not let up,; in fact, it was worse. Pain sheered through my head, and I was so weak. I fell to the ground and just lay there. I heard a car squeal close, and then there was great pain, which sent me out of breath. I felt could hear a far scream, just like the one on the phone. Then, all was just still and dar.