Your assignment is to create a poem that can be read both forwards and backwards. It is a challenging assignment that can bring a multitude of benefits to your writing; it can open up the possibility to perceive new possibilities in word structure, as well as add depth and dimension to a single poetic concept.
This assignment also teaches the importance of comma placement. Since your poem has to be read both forwards and backwards, reorganization reagarding comma placement becomes crucial in making your poem readable in both directions. For today's part of the assignment, do not include any commas. We will return to the comma placement portion at a later time.
Because this assignment is so difficult, I only ask that your poem be a minimum of seven lines, with a minimum of three words per line. It is due at the end of the period.
Here's an example I constructed to help guide you:
Peaceful and quiet
eternal sleep makes it so
death is transformation
soon comes change
pain wilting slowly
like dying flowers
ending is beginning
This assignment also teaches the importance of comma placement. Since your poem has to be read both forwards and backwards, reorganization reagarding comma placement becomes crucial in making your poem readable in both directions. For today's part of the assignment, do not include any commas. We will return to the comma placement portion at a later time.
Because this assignment is so difficult, I only ask that your poem be a minimum of seven lines, with a minimum of three words per line. It is due at the end of the period.
Here's an example I constructed to help guide you:
Peaceful and quiet
eternal sleep makes it so
death is transformation
soon comes change
pain wilting slowly
like dying flowers
ending is beginning
She asked he
ReplyDeletewill he sacrifice
or will he leave
he is everything to she
evil stands there
he will protect she
love will be tested
Aside from the "he/she" issue, this is very good.
DeleteDeath is haunting
ReplyDeleteMemories are tragic
Death and happiness
Love is lost
Memories floats place to place
Everywhere are dreams
Dreams runs over hope
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Deletebeast'ology lol
You are really growing as a writer. I feel so lucky to be a part of it.
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ReplyDeleteOpening graciousness of doors,
Shrubbery of careful planning,
Beautifully-crafted gnomes growing in awareness,
Unstoppable seasons in motion,
Jaw-dropping flowers of wonder,
Chimes dinging in background
With evenings sunshine-filled.
Incredible job. I love this.
DeleteThe silhouette stepped from the shadows, taking the shape of one of the most renowned commanders of the Legion, BlackStone. He would slit his own men’s throats if they hesitated at any command he gave. His armor was a shimmering white, an insult to the color and the purity it came with. He rested his left hand on the hilt of his sword, resting against his left hip. That sword, the knight knew, had seen more bloodshed than any piece of metal ever crafted. Vice was its name. It had been passed down from father to son over God knows how many generations. The sword was what gave the BlackStone family such renown. The question that was always asked was whether it was the BlackStone’s that gave the sword its wicked name, or whether the sword itself had disparaged the BlackStone family name
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ReplyDeleteanchor dropped low
pulling down close
wrong is right
now steps untraceable
now deep in
addiction in mode
it’s fiending wrong
I'm still not sure about "fiending," but other than that, this is very good.
DeleteTraits human embraced are
ReplyDeleteGood and bad
Tribulations and Triumphs
White and Black
Wrong and Right
Left and Right
Cowardice and Bravery
Poems are often frustrating
ReplyDeleteReckless and crazed
Picking word by word
Pencils are near
Unused and wasted
Being driven insane
Frustrating are poems
A great effort. You did it!
DeleteHappy!
ReplyDeleteShe is sad
Very sad
Am I sad
She is sad
Very sad
Am I sad
Is she.
Um....What can I say?
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ReplyDelete...American am I
ReplyDeletetrue made statements
often high flying
eyeing those delegating
always forgotten the befriended
loyaly serving the boycott
American am I ?..
This is really cool in a subversive sort of way. It challenges one's thought. Great job.
Deletethanks koop. i'll try harder next time.
DeleteHonest is love
ReplyDeleteFreedom seldom truth
Is Truth Pretty
Aren't lies pretty
Burden means heavy
Heaviness is another's
Yours is mine
Wow, you are such a natural writer. I love this.
DeleteRyan P. Tunison
ReplyDeleteRinging bells are
ceaseless and ominous
ding of incessancy
carried howling far-off
following distance of
invading those for
victory and plunders
This makes me laugh because it mirrors the experience of being interrupted by the dismissal bell in this class. Awesome job.
DeleteLife becomes death
ReplyDeleteDeath is imminent
Love is everything
Ying and yang
Joy and pain
Seeing is believing
Old becomes new
I like the way you played with the opposites in the piece. Excellent.
DeleteHappiness is pain
ReplyDeleteVividly and surreptitiously
Time cries, but
Found hope in
Comfort and security
Like white needs black
And sunshine needs rain.
Very good. Not only did you execute the format well, but there is a depth to this poem that is well suited to its form. Great job.
DeleteKarma will always be there
ReplyDeleteIf good is done
Good shall be returned,
If bad is done
Bad will come back,
To keep equilibrium
On this earth
Works forward, but not as well backward.
DeletePain is love
ReplyDeleteAs often one
As tides push to
People call help
They hurt due to
Pain disguised as
Hope and love
Nicely done!
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ReplyDeleteMirrors reflecting life
ReplyDeleteImmediately making so,
Life reflecting mirrors:
Choices, decisions making
Impressions of eternity
An e/affect which, we,
Understanding, fate and destiny.
World of reason
ReplyDeleteClock that strikes eight
Daytime has risen
New time and date
Time rules society
But society rules time
Power of reason
Over power of mind
You've created an elegant rhythm, both forward and backward. I'm a fan of the rhyme as well.
DeleteWho am I?
ReplyDeleteWhere do I belong?
Confused and unsure
I wish I knew
Trying to discover the “real me”
Where does my path lead?
What kind of person am I?
Who am I?
It works forward but not quite backward.
DeleteWhere are you
ReplyDeleteSkies lite by dreams
Light found darkness
In lost thoughts
Scary and misshapen
Now think deeply
You are where
I like that the two poems are reflections of one another in tone.
DeleteLove and pain
ReplyDeleteSmile and tears
Happy and Heartbreaking times
Strong and weak points
Together and apart
Loving and forgetful moments
Long lasting memories
A good strategy to use conjunctions to complete this challenging assignment.
DeleteGone forgotten and
ReplyDeleteLost with love
She goes under
Over taking by
Fate and time
Her intriguing heart
Broken with everlasting love
I like that you can read the whole thing backward and it still makes sense, not just the lines.
DeleteJerry and Whale
ReplyDeleteBlue is whale the
Give that cat a pat
Pat pat pat
Cat cat cat
Fail fail fail
Says mrs ell
Hrmmmm...
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