Monday, February 10, 2014

Diamante


Diamante

Diamante is a seven-line, diamond-shaped poem which contrasts two opposites. It is more a visual poem than one to be read aloud. Students can illustrate their final copies to produce an art piece. It follows this format:

First Line and seventh line - Name the opposites.
Second and sixth lines - Two adjectives describing the opposite nearest it.
Third and fifth lines - Three participles (ing words) describing the nearest opposite.
Fourth line - two nouns (if possible) for each of the opposites. (This is the transition point where the poem changes from one of the opposites to the other.)

 
Peaks,
Snowcapped, windswept,
Reaching, waiting, challenging
mountain ranges, ocean trenches,
Obscuring, waiting, daunting
Dark, black
Depths

Your assignment is to construct three of these.  They are due at the end of the period.



24 comments:

  1. Something wasn’t right about the pair, though. They looked…aged. Gavin’s face was no longer that of a newborns. He had an even stubble around his jawline, his skin was a bit tanner, and he had some scars on his face. His hair was styled into a flip of spikes that snuck out from underneath the front of his new beret. He had a brand new sniper rifle that looked top of the line resting on his back. He also wore full Syndicate plated armor as opposed to the crappy cloth gear they gave all Privates. Not to mention he was at least a foot taller.
    Isaac hadn’t changed much. His dreadlocks were a bit longer, maybe. He had a couple more scars and more stress lines on his face. He had the same dark complexion, same lost eye, same insanely tall height, all that was different was that he’d downgraded from the monk looking robe to the same armor as Gavin but with a platinum trim.

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  2. Love,
    Glow, purity
    Desiring, wanting, caring
    Honey moons, lonely nights
    Hurting, threatening, darkening
    Anger, Furious
    Hate

    Bright
    Light, shine
    Blinding, Warming, Sparkling
    Eye opening, time alone
    Hating, scaring, threatening
    Loneliness, cold
    Dark

    Winter
    Cold, bitter
    Snowing, shivering, whitening
    Ginger bread, vacation house
    Sweating, burning, tanning
    Pool, hot
    Summer

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  3. Sun
    Bright, light
    Shining, sparkling, amazing
    Beautiful day, cold night
    Calming, darkening, changing
    Spooky, lonely
    Moon

    Joy
    Happy, magical
    Singing, dancing, laughing
    Immense happiness, bitter sadness
    Longing, hoping, waiting
    Hopeless, dreadful
    Sorrow

    Hot
    Warm, summer
    Blistering, beating, heating
    Summer day, winter night
    Freezing, chilling, snowing
    Icy, frozen
    Cold

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  4. Rainforest
    Wet, Green
    Growing, Raining, Steaming
    Thick Greenery, Open Spaces
    Sweating, dying, longing
    Heat, Sand
    Desert

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  5. The dark was all she saw
    It occasionally came with peaks of light
    The light just filled her life with false hopes
    She tried so hard to get out
    It was never enough
    It seemed as if she would just get pushed down deeper at times
    There was never an in between phase for her
    The dark was pitch black and the peaks of light were as bright as ever
    Those peaks rarely came
    Her life was basically filled with dark
    It was as if she was trapped
    But now that is all gone
    She finally found her way out
    It took time
    But she realized a lot
    She realized that she couldn’t have her happiness depend on others
    However she doesn’t regret a thing
    She learned a lot from the pain that she was put in
    Her temporary dark helped her find her light that will last her forever
    She is now free
    Free from the world that she used to know
    It is all about the world that she has now entered

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  6. other assignment .

    When a child is young and is in the process of growing up they have a large group of friends, partially because making and keeping friends weren’t that difficult. Friendships back in elementary school were based on who was nice to you and who you had things in common with, in today’s world friendships are totally different. I’ve realized that when I was in the fifth grade, I could probably name about twenty people I considered to be a friend of mine. Now that I’m in high school and have two years down already, I can only name about five or six people that I’m close to. As you get older, you start to notice people’s true colors and realize that they weren’t really your friend from the beginning. The way I see it, I’m getting older and more mature, I don’t have time to worry about who is loyal and who is trustworthy. I guess the saying, “High school changes people, sometimes for better and sometimes for worse,” is actually true. It hurts not being able to tell that person things anymore or get advice from them, but life moves on and people learn from their mistakes. I don’t think I have it all figured it out, but I do think I’m getting somewhere. I often wonder how many friends I’m going to have by the time I graduate, and it seems as though every year my circle gets smaller. I’m actually okay with that because that’s less people I have to worry about betraying me. It’s a good thing finding out who your real friends are at a young age. You always know who your real friends are when you get into something serious. This shows you who is actually there and who will leave you to handle the situation on your own.

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  7. War
    Destructive, violent
    Raging, deafening, trying
    Times of misery, times of redemption
    Satisfying, beaming, gratifying
    Beautiful, incomprehensible
    Creation

    Love
    Passionate, everlasting
    Strengthening, creating, redefining
    Unconditional devotion, apathy
    Boring, detaching, uncaring
    Reductive, callous,
    Indifference

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  8. Happiness
    Beautiful, touching
    Laughing, living, loving
    Many emotions, confused feelings
    Breaking, crying, tearing
    Ugly, unwanted
    Sadness

    Volleyball
    Strong, arm-skilled
    Setting, bumping, spiking
    Many athletes, many sports
    Kicking, shooting, scoring
    Speedy, feet-skilled
    Soccer

    June
    Warm, sunny
    Playing, swimming, tanning
    The seasons of summer and winter
    Shivering, hiding, napping
    Cold, snowy
    December

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  9. Dreams
    Peaceful, Hopeful
    Sleeping, Resting, Aspiring
    Warm Bed, Vigorous Tremors
    Chilling, Falling, Looming
    Shadows, Doom
    Nightmare

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  10. Winter
    Arctic, Bitter
    Freezing, Frosting, Boring
    Snowflakes, Ice Skates, Cookouts, Hot nights
    Scorching, Relaxing, Sizzling
    Pleasant, Balmy
    Summer

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  11. Day
    Bright, Hopeful
    Welcoming, Waiting, Sun-shining
    Sky, Earth
    Enveloping, Chilling, Embracing
    Shadowy, Mysterious
    Night


    Him
    Hopeful, Happy
    Willing, Working, Singing
    Home, Hospital
    Hoping, Crying, Hiding
    Sad, Afraid
    Her



    Dogs
    Loyal, Man’s best friend
    Caring, Loving, Running
    Backyard, Bed
    Pouncing, Clawing, Purring
    Skeptical, Hungry
    Cats

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  12. Summer
    Hot, Sunny
    Swimming, Tanning, Sweating
    Beaches, Stay in
    Sledding, Snowing, Freezing
    Cold, Cloudy
    Winter


    Happy
    Smile, Laugh
    Joking, Cheering, Loving
    On Cloud Nine, Sick at Heart
    Crying, Hurting, Languishing
    Frown, Gloomy
    Sad


    Fast
    Speed, Quick
    Hurrying, Running, Scampering
    Cheetahs, Turtles
    Tip-Toeing, Crawling, Floating
    Tired, Worn Out
    Slow

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  13. Darkness
    Quiet, Lonely
    Soothing, Deafening, Chilling
    Moon, Sun
    Vibrating, Awakening, Boring
    Loud, Bright
    Light
    Fantasy
    Creativity, Warmness
    Writing, Painting, Creating
    Escape, Prison
    Working, Fighting
    Atrocious, Cold
    Reality
    Beach
    Smooth, Sandy
    Soothing, Crashing, Enlightening
    Ocean, Subway
    Hustling, Bustling, Moving
    Rough, Busy
    City

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  14. ***These are all random tidbits and have no relation to one another! *** (Just saying.)
    Treat thyself similar to a cactus—when all else fails, point.
    Dapper is another way of describing my favorite electronic—the clapper. That’s right. The clapper is indeed dapper.
    So I know that everyone has that one person in their life that they both feared and hated and thoroughly enjoyed doing so. My person was this older woman. Let’s call her… Mrs. Frey Hoffer. Now, this woman was nice. I’m not saying that she was a monster or a ruthless cartel leader. Nothing like that. But she was a pain in the ass to deal with and it definitely made my life interesting. You see, I was volunteering at this school on the weekends. I won’t say what type of school I went to every Sunday morning. But I was a classroom aide, which means I showed up late every week and did absolutely nothing while I was there—pretty classic stuff. So this one week, I had missed my ninety-four alarms and had woken up late. Yet I was still determined to go because I wanted to prove to the staff there that I wasn’t a flaky, lazy teenager with terrible punctuality—which I was, but not really important to mention. So I make it there halfway through the hour-long class and I approach the door. Now everyone who is late knows that the doors are always locked because of the danger of school shootings, so I reluctantly ring the doorbell, knowing full well that Mrs. Frey Hoffer will answer the door and scold me for my tardiness. Rrring! Rrring! No answer. I hit the other doorbell. Barring! Barring! Nothing. Okay, I think to myself. I have to tap on the window: that’s the last-case-scenario when you walk across the lawn and tap on the window of the classroom. Then someone from the class will let you in. Now, I count the windows—you know, like a pro—and I count one, two. I then trudge through the snow over to the second window—the giant, paneless window—and I don’t even get to tap on it. There, right before me, looking at me incredulously, is Mrs. Frey Hoffer herself; and my breath catches in my chest and stomach drops twenty-nine stories. I wouldn’t be as afraid if it were Bain before me. So she’s looking at me and I’m in shock and, of course, absolutely embarrassed. Like a total moron, I just mouth “doorbell,” making the doorbell motion with my index finger. I looked like a freaking mime—a bad one because I don’t think that mimes are supposed to mouth what they’re acting out. She then opens the side door for me, informs me that she was in a parent meeting. Oh great, I think. But worst of all, she says that the doors—remember the building has those?—they were ALL OPEN. A piece of me died in that moment.

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    1. P.S. Koop, I had posted it during class and then realized that I left something...inappropriate up there. So I deleted it and reposted my work without it. Here ye, here ye.

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    2. CORRECTION: "MY CHEST AND STOMACH DROP."

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  15. Girls
    Emotional, Sassy
    Loving, Caring, Charming
    Dresses, Nails, Footballs, Basketballs
    Disgusting, Baffling, Amusing
    Jerks, Mischievous
    Boys



    Love
    Peaceful, Emotional
    Cherishing, Enchanting, Devoting
    Heart, Marriage, Death, Envy
    Loathing, Discouraging, Disgusting
    Bitter, Infernal
    Hate


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  16. Life
    Fiery, Vibrant
    Learning, growing, enjoying
    Existence, soul, heart
    Witherithing, fading, passing
    Eternal sleep, heaven
    Death

    Sun
    Bright, Yellow
    Burning, blinding, spinning
    Warm sunshine, energy
    Shining, mesmerizing, calming
    Dark, peaceful
    Moon

    Sanity
    Clear,rational
    Thinking, wondering, exploring
    Open eyes and mind
    Crumbling, falling, fearing
    Unbalanced, Mad
    Insanity

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  17. Cats
    Lazy, furry
    Sleeping, Playing, Relaxing
    Idle, Energetic
    Playing, Running, Barking  
    Active, Crazy
    Dogs

    Spring
    Warm, Sunny
    Enjoying, Warming, Blooming
    Fun, Boring
    Boring, Freezing, Skiing
    Cold, Dark
    Winter

    Rock Music
    Fast, Fun
    Enjoying, Understanding, Brightening
    Amazing, Horrible
    Horrifying, Boring, Disgusting
    Bad, Pointless
    Rap Music

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  18. Love,
    Beautiful, passionate,
    Growing, craving, maturing,
    Happily ever-after, cold-hearted
    Harming, raging, destroying,
    Empty, hostile,
    Hate

    Light,
    Joyful, bright,
    Awakening, eye-opening, sparkling
    Daytime memories, nighttime terrors
    Depressing, darkening, scaring,
    Gloomy, black
    Dark

    Deep
    Meaningful, bottomless,
    Continuing, swallowing, discerning,
    Ocean floors, Rain puddles
    Lacking, growing, destroying,
    Care-free, facile
    Shallow

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  19. Friends

    Fun, Funny

    Playing, Enjoying, Laughing

    Heaven, Limbo

    Boring,Waiting, Frightening

    Scary, Empty

    Alone


    Planes

    High, Big

    Frightening, Flying, Landing

    Clouds, Land

    Waiting, Boring, Stopping

    Small, Slow

    Cars


    Dream

    Happy, Fun

    Enjoying, Neverlasting, Upsetting

    Happy Land, Worst Place

    Everlasting, Hurtful,Waiting

    Dark, Scary
    Nightmare

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  20. Greetings
    Waves, smiles
    Welcoming, rejoicing, exciting
    Warm hugs, wet tears
    Crying, weeping, hugging
    Sorrowful, Emotional
    Goodbyes

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  21. Diamond
    Bright, Precious
    Shining, Dazzling, Glistening
    Magnificently Admired, Unimpressively Viewed
    Unpleasing, Uninteresting, Boring
    Dull, Ugly
    Rock

    Old
    Wise, Experienced
    Reminiscing, Pondering, Contemplating
    Elderly Lady, Youthful Adolescent
    Living, Laughing, Loving
    Foolish, Careless
    Young

    Past
    Memories, Regrets
    Haunting, Embarrassing, Enduring
    Yesterday’s Mistakes, Tomorrow’s Emends
    Hoping, Planning, Anticipating
    Goals, Ambition
    Future

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  22. City
    Loud, Busy
    Beeping, Speeding, Glowing
    Tall Skyscrapers, Crashing Waves
    Burning, Swimming, Walking
    Quiet, Hot
    Beach

    Summer
    Hot, Humid
    Swimming, Tanning, Running
    Vacation house, Christmas Decorations
    Shoveling, Baking, Snowing
    Cold, Snow
    Winter

    Happy
    Giggles, Glow
    Laughing, Smiling, Loving
    A big Smile, A huge Frown
    Frowning, Crying, Hurting
    Upset, Tears
    Sad

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