Friday, December 13, 2013

Loop Poetry

Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb. Write 3 poems by the end of the period.

If everyone was happy
Happy as can be
The world would be a better place
Place for everyone to be free

Birds fly as they please
Please do not get in their way
Way of doing this is
Is to stay on the ground all day

To read is to gain knowledge
Knowledge one will keep forever
Forever prospering and understanding
Understanding what it takes to be clever.

10 comments:

  1. Dance every day
    Every day I try harder
    Harder the work becomes
    Becomes easier in the end

    Every stance and position becomes perfect
    Perfect makes everything else better
    Better everything is
    Is the better you will look

    The more you work the better you become
    Become better and everything else with be easy
    Easy it will be the less you have to practice
    Practice makes it perfect

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  2. Fists are flying through the air
    Air is a kinder word for the pollution
    Pollution and anger has become a way of life
    Life is not what it used to be, there is a solution
    Solution is a word that has become a puzzle to many
    Many don’t even bother to learn
    Learn? Do they know what that means?
    Means to learn and look? They just want to watch the world burn.

    Watch a bird soar and see what you’ll pick up
    Up high in the sky is the only way to fly
    Fly to where you’ll be free
    Free as the rivers run, just make sure to say good-bye.
    Bye to all your loved ones and people who care for you
    You are loved by so many, but freedom still nags at your mind.
    Mind you that you should follow your heart
    Heart is something we all have, but especially those who are brave and kind.

    I have seen my future in the eyes of the wise
    Wise eyes have shown me that I will be happy
    Happy as the sun that shines through
    Through the clouds that are sad and snappy
    Snappy clouds birth snappy people
    People will not bring me down
    Down to their level, no, I am happy here
    Here where I will never frown

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  3. As I walk in the building
    It is darlington I see
    As we play cards, he consistently thinks that he can beat me
    As I trash him and trash him, why can’t he see….that even if he practices he will never ever ever ever ever be able to beat a funny man like me.


    He needs to open his eyes and see the game for what it really is…. As much as we play every day he comes and he stays at the lunch table just to get beat In everyway
    Maybe I don’t understand or maybe he doesn’t understand that this game of pallis I does this every day.


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  4. Creativity gets your mind going
    Going through your imagination
    Imagination is what you use to make things up in your mind
    Mind you that is never a bad thing

    If I could fly
    Fly like a bird through the sky
    Sky high above every cloud
    Cloud nine and I cannot get myself down

    My Dad is my hero
    Hero that keeps me safe
    Safe and sound from all the bad in the world
    Worldwide known as Superman

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  5. The longer I wait, the longer it takes.
    Takes time, takes energy, takes everything from me.
    “Me” is the one person I should care about the most.
    Most of my patience is wasted on what I no longer see.

    You promise so much more than you portray.
    Portay what you mean.
    Mean what you say; stop lying, please.
    Please realize that I don’t care for words as much I care for what is seen.

    You only give me false hope.
    Hope that elevates me, hope that makes my heart beat.
    Beat me till you break me, that’s what you do with words.
    Words from you I’ll erase; I don’t want anything from you—not a single treat.

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  6. Life is filled with choices.
    Choices shape you.
    You can make your life better.
    Better to take action then do nothing.

    Nobody is perfect.
    Perfect is what you make it to be.
    Be yourself and enjoy being you.
    You have to love yourself first.

    Smile even though you’re hurting.
    Hurting because of all the pain.
    Pain in your heart that won’t go away.
    Away we go to brighter days.

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  7. In the middle of the night I hear a sound
    Sound of someone screaming
    I jump up and run
    Run toward the sound to find I was only dreaming

    The wrong time
    Time isn’t on my side
    For some reason living on the edge seems like a crime
    Crime that can’t be stopped

    Why are the skies so blue?
    Blue isn’t the mood I’m in
    Inside my mood is more of a yellow and that is true
    True I’m not really in a bad mood

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  8. Don't let anyone tell you you're not happy

    Happy is what one strives for

    For this reason no one can bring you down

    Down to the bottom floor


    Life was made to take risk

    Risk just stop one

    One should not stop because of you

    You only live once


    My birthday is tomorrow

    Tomorrow brings happiness

    Happiness of one more year of life
    Life is just a bliss

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  9. Loop Poem
    Music heard all around
    Around the melody goes
    Goes like the blow in the wind
    Wind is mother nature breathing

    Mortality keeps the people sane
    Sane like the weeping willow
    Willow as the sad song plays
    Plays a lullaby to the sky above

    Hit the string once more
    More is less
    Less is the outcome of wanting more
    More is less

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  10. Winter is soon approaching
    Approaching is the snow
    Snow will soon fall from the sky
    Sky will have a distinct glow

    Love will conquer all
    All is possible with love
    Love is eternal, forever
    Forever it should be dreamt of

    Life is what we make it
    It is wonderful, truly amazing
    Amazing things often occur,
    Occur too rapidly, time is racing

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