Your assignment is to create a poem that can be read both forwards and backwards. It is a challenging assignment that can bring a multitude of benefits to your writing; it can open up the possibility to perceive new possibilities in word structure, as well as add depth and dimension to a single poetic concept.
This assignment also teaches the importance of comma placement. Since your poem has to be read both forwards and backwards, reorganization reagarding comma placement becomes crucial in making your poem readable in both directions. For today's part of the assignment, do not include any commas. We will return to the comma placement portion at a later time.
Because this assignment is so difficult, I only ask that your poem be a minimum of seven lines, with a minimum of three words per line. It is due at the end of the period.
Here's an example I constructed to help guide you:
Peaceful and quiet
eternal sleep makes it so
death is transformation
soon comes change
pain wilting slowly
like dying flowers
ending is beginning
ReplyDeleteslipping, falling, crashing
it was beyond painful
I couldn’t move
I could only scream
someone come now!
help me please!
no one came
I heard nothing but my own screams
I felt nothing but shear pain
wrenching through me like a knife
despair and loneliness
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ReplyDeleteLove is evil
DeleteShe slept next to I
Smiled she, lying
She lies to me
She played I
Evil is love
Love is fake
We tend to see
ReplyDeleteWhat makes people laugh
Instead of making them cry
We become the people we want to be.
We think about those close to us.
When pain gets to be too much.
Life gets challenging.
Safe and secure
ReplyDeleteFree the mind
They are one
Strong are they
Fierce and unbeatable
Unafraid and powerful
Deep in dream
Crazy is life man
ReplyDeleteFake people are
Know don’t I see
See people’s positives
Fear is love
Are females the devil
Sleep is eternal
ReplyDeleteDreaming is an illusion of what we want reality to be
People hurt us, and we hurt them
The pain never ends
We live only to die
Why must life be so dreary?
Life is the beginning to the end
The darkness takes us all
ReplyDeleteAs our life starts to fall
near the end of time
We show the power within our self
And live a life to tell
And give us the hope
That light will soon shine once more
Heart my lost
ReplyDeleteA person tells
One true one
The only time
Strength and weakness
Life of despair
Hatred are people
Jealousy a sickness
ReplyDeleteTurn faces green
Friends transform enemies
Pain is present
Mistakes become habits
Trust is gone
Forgive and forget
Nature is beautiful
ReplyDeleteWeather and life
Rain falling down
Sunshine brings out
Wind blowing clouds
Snow makes cold
Tornados foreshadows disaster
Cheerfully and slowly
ReplyDeleteHappily smiling vividly
Children to elders
Him to her
Everyone is there
Side by side
Forever for you
Waiting family warmly
Christmas snowing white
2013 is here
Spirit and light lights
Covered houses white
Where are we now
ReplyDeletedarkness and silence the
cold and pain
the friend that once
saved you from hurt
I am gone
deeply I feel Lost
Awesome job! It's pretty hard to do a bi-directional poem that makes sense. I am impressed.
DeleteSound is life
ReplyDeleteHarmony in mind
Notes take to heart
Last out to play
Minors balance majors
Instruments and values
Basics of life
Cold and chilly
ReplyDeleteWindy and blurry
Frozen and barren
Holidays and celebrations
Family and fun
Together and happy
Winter is winter
Burning slowly
ReplyDeleteIt’s consuming and
Gripping his heart
His twisting emotions
Endless tossing and turning
Never resting
Confusion is constant
For the first time
ReplyDeleteShe saw the tears in his eyes
The dripping pouring rain
She forced herself to look away
He couldn’t even look at her
The pain felt like weights on his shoulders
He couldn’t even lift himself from the ground
What do I really see?
ReplyDeleteWith a flower planted in the meadow
While underneath sat a mound of dirt
With a somber look across my face
I looked towards the sky across the field
No one can escape the inevitable
No one can escape death
She told I
ReplyDeleteChoose, you or him
Too late was I
He died there
Was that unfair
Only memory of him have I
As well as pain
Lightly and airily
ReplyDeleteClouds move and effortlessly
Torment wind and light
Lacking restraint and control
Travel and fly can clouds
That so shift
Space and atmosphere
The moving white of rivers
Me and you
ReplyDeleteForever and together
Love is happiness
Our love isn’t weak
Overcome the obstacles
It’s a challenge
That we will face
Death is easy
ReplyDeleteLiving is complicated
Thinking is trying
Be your own
Never give up
Learning from mistakes
You are you
good times are bad
ReplyDeleteliving is pain
violence have people
sorrow is enlightenment
do good in life
you will be rewarded
your pain is gone
Faces smiling underneath
ReplyDeleteTrue pouring rain
Life requires disaster
Colors triumph storms
The beauty from pain
Darkness within
Lost sunshine from clouds
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