Thursday, January 16, 2014

Midterm Review Day Two

Write 10 lunes by the end of the period. They must be new and original to receive credit.

22 comments:

  1. The trouble
    With growing up is,
    Acceptance.

    Kellin Quinn
    Is so attractive.
    Marry me.

    Memories;
    Infinite laughter,
    Endless smiles.

    Little bear,
    Sitting in the woods
    Eating grass.

    Clarity,
    Acceptance of past.
    Recreate.

    Ten dollars
    In my black phone case.
    Just found out.

    You’re not here,
    Mrs. Ell where are you?
    Are you sick?

    Candy crush
    Is so addicting
    I can’t stop.

    Broken nails
    Really annoy me
    Why why why.

    Tree of leaves
    Shading me from sun
    Thank you sir.

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  2. Ups and downs
    Life is filled with them
    All worth it

    Cold and crisp
    The air blows swiftly
    Bad weather

    Music plays
    Everyone dancing
    Having fun

    Don’t give up
    Keep moving forward
    Never stop

    Library
    Filled with many books
    Book sale soon

    Ambition
    Craving for success
    Devotion

    Take control,
    Take a stance to change
    Act today.

    Be different,
    Be unique, be rare
    Be yourself

    Ideas
    Developed from a
    Single thought

    Such struggles
    Define who we are
    As people

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  3. 1. Blue Ivy
    A name no one Knew
    Until now
    2. Heaven is
    Way too far away
    From us all
    3. Poisoned love
    Out of it for so long
    Is this real?
    4. Rockets blast
    Shooting out to space
    Searching for….
    5. Flawless life
    You’re beautiful, love
    Forever
    6. I’m haunted
    By my past and dreams
    They won’t leave
    7. Halo shines
    A fallen angel
    That must stay
    8. You hear that?
    The angry crickets
    Must be night
    9. Media
    Giving us huge lies
    That we love
    10. What’s the truth?
    Can we handle it?
    Probably

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  4. 1.I just cry
    Knowing you are gone
    It kills me

    2.I love you
    Something so simple
    But can’t show

    3.Flowers bloom
    The birds are chirping
    It’s now spring

    4.It’s different
    Something is different
    It feels wrong

    5.Say something
    It’s just that easy
    Just say it

    6.It’s too cold
    My fingers are numb
    My toes froze

    7.I just can’t
    I just can’t do it
    I want to

    8.The snowfall
    The first one this year
    Beautiful

    9.What happened
    We were together
    And you left

    10.They don’t know
    They can never know
    Be quiet

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  5. 1.Stress takes a
    toll on the body
    and the mind
    2.Time moves fast
    making you think how
    fast life goes
    3.Tired and weak
    stressed and broken but
    still moving
    4.Love is the
    best thing a person
    receives
    5.Restless mind
    always thinking and
    forgetting
    6.Wanting to
    sleep but the mind
    keeps thinking
    7.Smiling through
    the day even though
    it is bad
    8.Happiness
    and love is all I need
    in my life
    9.Reading through
    old things and smiling
    about life
    10.All good things
    come to an end at
    a bad time

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  6. As school time passes
    The percentage hits 10 percent
    Pretty soon ill be able to charge my phone

    I look over and see a red hoody
    A hoody with Dunellen on it
    It is a bright red hoody

    Looking around the room
    Of off on on off on
    The order of the computers I look at



    I look at the picture
    And see black and white
    Mind you I also see colored and stripped shades

    Pretty girls here ugly girls there
    Pretty soon these girls will grow
    And become even more ugly

    I walk in class and feel hot air
    After a while it will get hotter
    Because of this thick hoody

    Book bag here book bag there
    Book bags everywhere
    Because this is school book bags belong here

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  7. The cool snow
    the freezing cold
    the winter

    Happiness
    when with family
    by myself

    Difference
    World is filled with it
    makes us, us

    The feeling
    it flickers on off
    confusing

    Computer
    all information
    addicting

    Brilliance
    once in a life time
    someone is

    Succeeding
    comes when you work hard
    get through life

    Stressfulness
    hard to deal with it
    torturous

    Terrible
    something that scares you
    terrorist

    The blue box
    the girl who waited
    the mad man

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  8. Days Away
    From where I should be
    Someday soon

    Fortunate
    To have you with me
    Constant love

    Constantly
    Constantly wanting
    But can’t reach

    Literature
    Food for my noggin
    I love books

    Abandon
    Never to look back
    Say goodbye

    Ambition
    I’m always lacking
    So lazy


    Millionaire
    I wish I could be
    Mad money

    Seventeen
    Magic and heart-break
    No regrets

    Horizon
    The end and the start
    Together

    Together
    You and me always
    Forever

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  9. Creating
    Always making things
    Forever

    Stepping out
    Into the harsh world
    Quite a feat.

    Stepping in
    Away from the world
    There’s nothing

    Fulfillment
    A bargain, a deal,
    And oneself

    Collisions
    Of thoughts and minds
    Seldom end

    Defining
    Moments, memories
    Shape our lives


    Words are tough
    Some are big, some small
    They’re all great

    Whimsical
    Full of life and verve
    But empty

    Sometimes I
    Take lots of pauses
    Just like here

    Watches, waits
    For the right moment
    To take you

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  10. Childish
    That’s all that you are.
    So stupid

    I thank you.
    Thank you for nothing.
    I am done.

    I give up.
    You’re wasting my time.
    You don’t change.

    My head hurts
    You’re hurting me.
    Just leave, please.

    Time to go
    It’s time to move on
    Time is up.

    Time flies by
    Time comes to an end
    End of time

    Not thinking
    No consequences
    Let me live

    My dear please
    Please understand me
    Comprehend

    I’m in pain
    Make it go away
    Forever

    Stop Nick, bye
    You’re so annoying
    Koop said so

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  11. 1. My feelings
    Many things cross the mind
    Just breath please
    2. I’m so scared
    My worries are strong
    Think harder
    3. Let me be
    I just want to cry
    Life is hard
    4. Worried pass by
    Everybody leave
    Just, why me?
    5. I feel bad
    My stomach feels sick
    Please help me
    6. Why me though?
    Nothing can help me
    I’m not okay
    7. Someone help
    I just can’t focus
    Life is rough
    8. Let me go
    I just want to leave
    May I cry?
    9. I feel bad
    My heart is racing
    Come and help
    10. Difficult
    Why is it like this?
    Re-do please

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  12. Black and white.
    Life is a highway.
    Choose your path.

    Foaming mouth
    Sugar stick galore
    Hyper child.

    Tin harpoon
    Mini and pointy
    Paper clip

    Flustered fish
    Flop around the hook.
    The shark laughs.

    Potted plants
    Pose as party plants.
    Pathetic.

    Run away
    So fast that your new
    Shoes fall off.

    Green photo
    Faded red back drop
    Gallery

    He can type
    Really fast—the Key
    Board Wizard.

    Tell me no
    One more time and I
    Will walk out.

    Spells and tricks,
    Or prayers and hymns? What’s
    A Wiccan?

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  13. Superstar
    That is what she is
    It’s all fame

    She’s unknown
    They will never know
    What’s her name?

    Tastes so good
    It burst in my mouth
    It’s so good

    It comes easy
    That means it’s not real
    It then goes

    Similar faces
    They are all the same
    I need change

    I’m aware
    I know why you’re here
    Just go back

    A stranger
    That is who you are
    Come change that

    I’m caught up
    I need to let go
    But I can’t

    She’s afraid
    But what could it be?
    She’ll only know

    I do know
    You don’t think I do
    But I do

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  14. 1. It was loud
    The sound I just heard
    What was it?
    2. Who am I?
    What am I doing?
    Where am I?
    3. She doesn’t know
    Where can it be now?
    Lost forever
    4. I feel bad
    She lost it right now
    Where is it
    5. The sadness
    All she feels is that
    I can’t help
    6. That was rude
    How could you say that?
    Take it back
    7. The questions
    They all fill my head
    Make them stop
    8. I don’t care
    Why are you talking?
    Waste of time
    9. be happy
    Just do not be sad
    Let it be
    10. Just freedom
    Freedom will save you
    Forever free

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  15. Lune I
    Cold as night,
    Darkness does not fright,
    But grows bright.

    Lune II
    Love as wind,
    To pass us behind;
    You I find.

    Lune III
    Virtue t’ love,
    Yet black is a heart
    T’ let it rove.

    Lune IV
    Mask of love,
    For false is each lie,
    But yours true.

    Lune V
    Bewildered,
    Love to grow as thorns;
    Still a rose.

    Lune VI
    To destroy
    All that once to know;
    Lost to now.

    Lune VII
    Thorns to grow,
    T’ choke the growing rose;
    Love is strength.

    Lune VIII
    Hate of all
    Is no reason t’ live;
    Always deaf.

    Lune IX
    Lost in time,
    No reason to rhyme;
    Cruel as time.

    Lune X
    Love to lose
    Vast petal of rose;
    Overdose.

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  16. I don’t care
    I do what I want,
    When I want

    My nephew
    Is so beautiful
    I love him.

    You can see
    The fear in my eyes.
    It won’t leave.

    All this joy
    My family brings.
    Warms my heart

    My mom nags.
    Do this and do that.
    Just shut up.

    Melissa
    Is trey songz wifey
    Forever

    Joey sucks
    He is not my friend
    Go away

    Kupiec
    Should give me an A.
    Cause I’m cool.

    The ocean
    Is always crowded
    I hate it

    I am done
    This is my last one
    Finally.

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  17. Let it be
    John Lennon believes
    Imagine

    Big country
    That is who Jay is
    Jay baby

    Mario
    Super Mario
    Luigi

    Games I play
    Are very complex
    Jay argues

    Basketball
    My favorite sport
    Ill whoop Koop

    Ambition
    Running through my veins
    Champion

    Jays a beast
    You have poked the bear
    Champion

    Pencil case
    Rectangular box
    For pencils

    Computer
    Sometimes a blank screen
    Writers block

    Jay singing
    Just like Eminem
    But better

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  18. Angels fly
    Spreading their wings out
    Majestic

    Hopeless love
    Heart and soul in pain
    Tears fall down

    Beauty is
    The smile on your face
    Be you please

    Leaves sway
    Warm nights and soft sand
    Love summer

    Who am I?
    Where will my life lead?
    Need to know

    Happiness
    A positive mind
    A happy life

    Let it go
    Let go of the past
    I'm here now

    I'm so tired
    Just want to lay down
    Sleep is calm

    Forever
    Our lives are so short
    So have fun

    Wild curly hair
    Wish it was easier
    Still love it

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  19. This is short
    No complications
    Simply short

    These aren’t bad
    Not too creative
    But not bad

    Dogs and cats
    Can be a poem
    But not good

    Short is good
    Easy to work with
    Not too hard

    Now it’s hard
    I’m out of ideas
    Oh lord-y

    I once was
    A very small child
    I’m still small

    I don’t know
    Why this is so hard
    Frustration

    Its taking
    Forever to do
    So much work

    These are not
    The best I could do
    But they’re here

    I am done
    This is the last one
    Celebrate

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  20. Lunes are dumb

    They are just haikus

    Three five three


    The best sport

    Soccer fun to watch

    And to play


    Ronaldo

    Balon de oro

    Sure he won


    Messi’s back

    He had got injured

    A legend


    I have friends

    There are so many

    I trust one


    Family

    Better than all friends

    They love you


    Hurry up

    Time is almost up

    (Gasp) oh no


    Its review

    But it's kind of fun

    Not review


    Chemistry

    I used to like it

    Now I don't



    It is time

    Its one forty nine

    Class is out


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  21. dewy mornings

    no trace but droplets

    of water hanging

    on the tips

    of the grass



    nice weather

    slight breeze ever

    so lifting sand

    from the beach

    into the wind



    fall

    lightly colored leaves

    scatter the floor

    blinding the

    once green grass

    as if it was shielding itself

    from the misery that

    it’s about to withhold







    night out on the town

    bright neon lights

    replace the sun

    music starts to play

    people talking can

    be heard from

    across the street



    The fear of loneliness

    is creeping behind

    the doors of wonder

    The door that the one

    dares to open it has no

    choice but to let it take over

    To surrender in mercy or

    be sacrificed to the power

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  22. We will run
    As far as we can
    Stay away

    What journey
    Can be found alone
    With no one

    No one else
    Will know what happened
    But yourself

    Is there time
    To quickly escape
    And safely

    Going where?
    To keep yourself safe
    Keep quiet

    Who will know?
    Where you will be at?
    Will you share?

    Without me
    Uncertainty comes
    You were safe

    Now you’re not
    You didn’t trust me
    You should have

    Prison break
    Makes you want to run
    Not for long

    Happiness
    Because I am done
    What comes next?

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