Thursday, May 30, 2013

Final Review Day 3

Construct 10 lunes.

19 comments:

  1. We are lost
    It will never clear
    In the dark

    Falling down
    I jumped to be free
    I’m not free

    My life ends
    All by his mistake
    He shot me

    Endless noise
    People in the crowd
    Rock concert

    The caged bird
    Never to fly free
    Left inside

    Dying world
    Never to be clean
    This is Earth

    The rage builds
    Until the war starts
    Useless death

    It burns me
    But I stay my hand
    On the fire

    He just sits
    Never takes action
    Like statues

    Move the ball
    Pass the puck for goal
    Just a game

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  2. Summertime
    Hot days and long nights
    Terrific

    Blowing wind
    Nice way to cool off
    Cools my head

    Doing chores
    Always on hot days
    Profuse sweat

    End of school
    Waiting for ten months
    Coming soon

    Senior year
    Goes by pretty fast
    Easy work

    Too much rage
    Builds up inside you
    Explodes out

    End of life
    Eventually comes
    Eternal

    Emptiness
    Makes you feel lonely
    No one’s there

    Jeans
    Don’t wear on hot days
    Just wear shorts

    Sitting here
    Typing some stuff up
    Chillin out

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  4. Summer time
    Scorching hot weather
    Sweating guys

    Vegetables
    Squash and cucumbers
    Carrots too

    Computers
    Technology kills
    Human life

    Mustaches
    Life without the stache
    Would be bare

    Search engines
    Google, Bing, Yahoo
    Helps us out

    Family
    Loving, caring, close
    Never leaves

    There’s nothing left all
    Gone and run away
    Deserted

    Sitting down
    Comfy lazy place
    Relaxing

    Seventeen
    Comes after sixteen
    Then eighteen

    Brush your teeth
    Hygienic, smells good
    Brighter smiles

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  5. The Prestige
    Still haven’t finished
    Annoying

    Sir Maxham
    Really good at math
    Not much else

    Rutgers games
    People bring their own
    Caps? Crazy

    Fiction is
    Just something that you
    Don’t believe

    That Lune was
    Serious In my
    Opinion

    Poetry
    Making nothing sound
    all pretty

    Emotion
    Real or insincere?
    Hard to read

    Spiderman
    Uses cool webs, but
    Batman wins

    Trying to run
    but falling behind
    he’s so FAST!

    Kupiec
    Left us for Gatsby
    Kay Thanks Bye

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  6. Where to go
    When there is no place
    Run away

    Live like love
    Like you could lose it
    Don’t let go

    Close it out
    Like you close your door
    Forget it

    Like a song
    That’s what life is like
    Live lyrics

    Let it be
    Breathe in and breathe out
    Don’t look back

    Do not fret
    It will be alright
    Don’t give up


    Make life last
    Life is a present
    Not to waste

    Chemistry
    I don’t want to go
    Hate that class

    This weekend
    I really can’t wait
    Hurry up!

    Excited
    Prom is tomorrow
    Cannot wait

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  7. In the yard
    There were three rabbits
    I killed them


    Every day
    all you do is sit
    on the couch


    Computers
    have minds of their own
    Or do they


    Going home
    that’s what I will do
    once I’m free


    When you’re gone
    nothing will be right
    I can’t live


    Annoying
    that describes today’s
    therapy



    This morning
    was odd and quiet
    not normal


    I can’t stop
    picking at this scar
    disgusting


    I woke up
    only to find I
    overslept


    no one knows
    what I am hiding
    it’s secret


    Doctor Who
    is hard to follow
    still love it

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  8. 1.) Take a walk
    Take a slow deep breathe
    Keep walking
    2.) A flutter
    A glimmer of light
    That feeling
    3.) Happiness
    Simple emotion
    Hard to hold
    4.) Head up dear
    I know life is hard
    But stay strong
    5.) Fight your fears
    Stand strong against them
    Have control
    6.) The big blue
    The deepest dark depths
    The unknown
    7.) Fairytales
    A soothing story
    A kids’ tale
    8.) Define it
    Remind me of it
    Create it
    9.) Live out loud
    Beak out of the crowd
    Be crazy
    10.) Different
    Exciting and cool
    Be insane

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    1. Number six is my favorite. You never fail to write so well!

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  9. 1. I want you
    Things don’t always happen
    I’m sorry

    2. Can I leave?
    I’m trapped in my world
    Get me out

    3. I can’t hear
    Too many voices
    Let me leave

    4. Vanity
    People can control
    But they don’t

    5. Rain falls down
    Rain drips on my head
    Let it fall

    6. A tear falls
    A pain strikes my heart
    I will cry

    7. Fall apart
    My heart weeps slowly
    There it goes

    8. Truth is told
    Many hearts broken
    Hold it in

    9. Make it be
    Things cannot be said
    Be careful

    10. Live again
    Shine bright like a star
    Make it good

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  10. The truth hurts
    Diamond in the rough
    So it says

    You are here
    Here is where you’ll stay
    Be happy

    Call me bluff
    I will tell on you
    Please try me

    Summer dress
    How hot it will be
    I can’t wait

    College life
    University
    Hard work helps

    Prom weekend
    Secrets will be told
    This is bad

    Erase it
    All the memories
    Do it now

    Do keep calm
    I’m a Capricorn
    The best sign

    It is hot
    Fun in the bright sun
    School please end

    Have a friend
    Be a loyal friend
    All will work

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  11. Samantha Ruiz

    The sunlight
    Is shining bright
    It is hot

    Friends
    They are funny
    Annoying

    Family
    Are always there
    Protective

    Living young
    Can do anything
    Its trouble

    Memories
    Have their ups and downs
    Remember

    Problems
    Fixing them a lot
    Having fights
    Be happy
    Enjoying your life
    Live your life

    Don’t worry
    People live and learn
    Be stress free

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  12. College:
    This Has Just Set In
    Getting Tough
    Not kids anymore
    Job Hunt:
    Looking for a job
    None out there
    Not easy out there
    The Break:
    It wasn’t that bad
    Seaside bound
    Romantic and fun
    Fam[ily]:
    They are by your side
    Thick and thin
    Mainly committed

    Bachata :
    That is my passion
    Romantic
    Very good at it
    Trust :
    Not easy these days
    Trust not found
    Hard to build trust up
    My Life :
    Soccer, Dance, Boxing
    Fun, social
    But family is first
    Stars:
    Look up at the stars
    I’ll be there
    Never feel alone

    Junior:
    A trouble-maker
    Always barks
    Messes up the house

    June:
    The Last week of school
    Steve’s birthday
    We want to have fun

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  13. 1 He was bleeding
    His wound was looking bad
    They shot him
    2 His name ahmed
    He wasn’t happy with it
    The name changed
    3 Love is evil
    It could kill a lot
    Of people here
    4 He was tall
    Everyone made fun of him
    He killed himself
    5 hate me or
    Love me, I will fight
    Till the end
    6 don’t judge me
    You don’t know my story
    You don’t know
    7 Darkness is happiness
    Don’t talk about it if
    You don’t know
    8 The sun shine
    The moon cries all day
    The sun smiles
    9 You are beautiful
    They sit there and hate
    Don’t mind them
    10 Life will end
    But make the time special
    Don’t waste it

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  14. 1.On and on
    Not once stopping
    Ongoing
    2.On the ground
    Away the worm crawls
    Needing dirt
    3.Resistance
    A useless effort
    Offers hope
    4.Lilium
    A brief beauty
    Blossom
    5.Humankind
    A strange puzzle
    Varying
    6.Wicked deeds
    Forever staining
    Happiness
    7.A home
    Is with family
    Together
    8.Restart
    Fixing past mistakes
    A blank slate
    9.Bravery
    To overcome fear
    Strength
    10.Unseen
    Part of the background
    Petty presence

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  15. Waking at day time
    having fun
    going to bed late

    Smiling at her
    hugging her
    telling you love her

    Family at the shore
    who wants more
    make me want to soar

    Birds in the dark night
    taking flight
    taking in the sight

    Laughing all at once
    Smiling
    being with family

    The love was once lost
    once gone
    but has come back here

    Technology grows
    computers
    and iPod’s, cell phones

    School makes you work hard
    makes you stressed
    but will build you up

    Sitting here writing
    a poem
    about writing lunes

    Stories that we read
    amusing
    make you cry and laugh

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    1. For the seventh lune, I'm pretty sure the 'and' should be in between 'iPod' and 'cell phones'. Just so you know...

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  16. Blue dolphins
    Swimming in oceans
    Beautiful

    Panda bears
    Wish to be colored
    Eats bamboo

    Brown tree trunk
    Records the Earth’s age
    Sandy and rough

    Blazing sun
    Rise up high in sky
    Far away

    Valentines
    Holiday of love
    Chocolate

    Human life
    Ending when you’re born
    Short and dear

    Soft-felt snow
    Flying like sawdust
    Goes with wind

    Striped tigers
    Live as carnivores
    Free in nature

    Giant eagles
    Soaring in the sky
    Predator

    Dark panther
    Fast and ferocious
    Imperceptible

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